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Oh God! I lost everything
How should I start again
Oh Almighty! I’m almost broken.

Am I a human being or anything else!
How it is possible now to hold her,
I should have destroyed on the street
She brought me under the sun,
Today I broke her lovely heart
Am I really ok or mentally sick!
She is crying now on the roof
How will I console my love
Nothing is remaining for defense
I wish to hide, should I suicide?
Her beautiful blue eyes cry
Who the cruel responsible for this!
Oh my! It’s me, a human being
Forgive me, please forgive me
Can you give me last chance to feel?
Swear on my existence, it won’t happen again
Should I need to prove, how much I love
Without you I’m really not me,
Can you please slap me twice?
What you wish please do this,
Else I can’t stand now on my feet.

Oh God! She’s looking at me with smile
You really shouldn’t be so kind,
May I kiss you just to be sure?
You are yet only mine.




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To A Lovely Heart

Contributed by TearS on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 01:22:34 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



What should I do now
Oh God! I lost everything
How should I start again
Oh Almighty! I’m almost broken.

Am I a human being or anything else!
How it is possible now to hold her,
I should have destroyed on the street
She brought me under the sun,
Today I broke her lovely heart
Am I really ok or mentally sick!
She is crying now on the roof
How will I console my love
Nothing is remaining for defense
I wish to hide, should I suicide?
Her beautiful blue eyes cry
Who the cruel responsible for this!
Oh my! It’s me, a human being
Forgive me, please forgive me
Can you give me last chance to feel?
Swear on my existence, it won’t happen again
Should I need to prove, how much I love
Without you I’m really not me,
Can you please slap me twice?
What you wish please do this,
Else I can’t stand now on my feet.

Oh God! She’s looking at me with smile
You really shouldn’t be so kind,
May I kiss you just to be sure?
You are yet only mine.








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Re: To A Lovely Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 06:04:14 PM AEST
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This is really sad,yet it holds hope..Nice!


Re: To A Lovely Heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 17th October 2003 @ 09:27:02 AM AEST
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From the way I'm reading it, it's from a guy who just broke a girls heart. Am I right? lol. Anyway a beautifully written poem, it's nice to see someone caring for the girls with broken hearts :D




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