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I waited for the sun to come, it took too long.
Bleeding I die alone, alone I lived, alone I died.
All alone I couldn't stay strong, all along I cried.
Pull my posters off the wall, all alone, I'm not going to need them anymore.
Touching my treasured necklace, the memories, alone.
My life what a waste, a hole, someone else other than me deserved this soul.
All alone fighting to find one reason to stay here.
Fighting this oncoming fear of going insane.
Feeling the acid rain burning my skin.
All alone my will to live growing dim, tears fill to the brim.
All alone I bleed, and I bleed for no one.
I know no one will come, I die alone, alone forever more.
I try to die, but I don't have anyone to die for. [comments] => 8 [counter] => 334 [topic] => 48 [informant] => EmSal [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Alone

Contributed by EmSal on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 08:07:02 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Bleeding I die for no one, not even myself.
I waited for the sun to come, it took too long.
Bleeding I die alone, alone I lived, alone I died.
All alone I couldn't stay strong, all along I cried.
Pull my posters off the wall, all alone, I'm not going to need them anymore.
Touching my treasured necklace, the memories, alone.
My life what a waste, a hole, someone else other than me deserved this soul.
All alone fighting to find one reason to stay here.
Fighting this oncoming fear of going insane.
Feeling the acid rain burning my skin.
All alone my will to live growing dim, tears fill to the brim.
All alone I bleed, and I bleed for no one.
I know no one will come, I die alone, alone forever more.
I try to die, but I don't have anyone to die for.

Copyright © EmSal ... [ 2003-10-11 08:07:02]
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Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 08:40:17 AM AEST
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Em......Another amazing write. So deep and powerful. I often feel this way and after a year, I am just starting to get through my pain. Give it a chance, give life a chance, because it is worth living for.

Luv Stace

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Jellybellyprincess on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 11:20:59 AM AEST
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powerful words, but they're not entirely true. No offens or anything to your opinion, cause it's yours to have. But God cares so deeply about every single person on this Earth! EVERY SINGLE ONE! He cares so much about you that he was reduced to nothing and died a gruesome, horrible, dusgusting death in front of crowds and crowds of people. Just for you. So that you can live an eternity with God. So if you ever feel like there's nothing to live for, no one who really cares, open the Bible. "For He Himself has said, 'I will never leave you nor forsake you.'" (Hebrews 13:5 b) "I sought out the Lord, and He heard me, and delivered me from ALL my fears." (Psalm 34:4) God cares THAT MUCH about us, that he'll cast all our fears away and take care of all our problems. Read up on it, you'll probably find some interest =)

God bless,
JBP

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by hope on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 11:40:20 AM AEST
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last line is so powerful.

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Avarice_Riot on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 12:36:59 PM AEST
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Another ingenious piece of work. There is so much pain and desperation in this, it really reaches out to the reader. Well done.

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Saturday, 11th October 2003 @ 09:00:37 PM AEST
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very good piece, I do hope you are well.
held me captive reading this. Crow

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th October 2003 @ 05:36:15 AM AEST
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Powerful, and sad...... speechless!

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by texasw97 on Sunday, 9th November 2003 @ 11:30:03 AM AEST
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Man, I'm loving this. I thought I was the only one that felt like this. Man this is tight. Please, keep on writing, that's the only way to get crap off your chest. Well at least for me it is. Whoa

Re: Alone (User Rating: 1 )
by secretwind on Saturday, 29th November 2003 @ 11:11:42 PM AEST
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EXCELLENT!!!

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