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Array ( [sid] => 24335 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => believe me....wishing u was alive [time] => 2003-10-04 00:05:00 [hometext] => try and figure out your self what my poem is about....& get bck 2 me [bodytext] => Mistakes mistakes I always make
but say sorry everytime you break
lies lies I always tell but believe me when I say I'm right!!
Jokes jokes thats all you hear but believe me when I say i care!
laugh laugh thats all you want but believe me when i say your wrong...
right right thats all you are, how about me am I just a scar?
stars stars in your eyes shining like me when you was alive...
alive alive thats what your not then how comes I think of you while I'm in this spot...
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 153 [topic] => 43 [informant] => M2003UK [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
believe me....wishing u was alive

Contributed by M2003UK on Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 12:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Mistakes mistakes I always make
but say sorry everytime you break
lies lies I always tell but believe me when I say I'm right!!
Jokes jokes thats all you hear but believe me when I say i care!
laugh laugh thats all you want but believe me when i say your wrong...
right right thats all you are, how about me am I just a scar?
stars stars in your eyes shining like me when you was alive...
alive alive thats what your not then how comes I think of you while I'm in this spot...




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Re: believe me....wishing u was alive (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygodslove on Saturday, 4th October 2003 @ 12:39:51 AM AEST
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well you got me thinking....you will have to let me know what you mean...maybe its promise..i dont know.....you got me..sandy


Re: believe me....wishing u was alive (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 26th October 2003 @ 03:24:01 PM AEST
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we all make mistakes but a good person is who learns from them :) liked it


Re: believe me....wishing u was alive (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 16th November 2003 @ 09:02:47 AM AEST
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sweet stuff




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