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Array ( [sid] => 24110 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Justified Death Sentence [time] => 2003-09-30 03:25:00 [hometext] => A scrawl. I realized when I proof-read it, that it could be taken two ways. I don't care, I know what it means to me. [bodytext] => COME ON
I'LL SHOW YOU SOMETHING

What makes you think that I will just go along with everything?
I am not that simple and weak - I am just misconstrued
Everything I would ever have wanted to remember
You just destroyed it all before it began - You are that lewd

SO NOW ITS MY TURN TO STRIKE (BACK) FOR WHAT YOU DID
YOU ARE THE LOWEST THERE IS
YOU ARE PURE *****
SO NOW I CAN TAKE JUSTICE INTO MY OWN HANDS
YOU ARE A DEAD MAN WALKING
YOU ARE PURE *****

A JUSTIFIED
DEATH SENTENCE - DEATH SENTENCE

You played with a child's mind and let it scar
You molested the innocence that was born to all
I'LL KILL YOU FOR THE THINGS YOU DID - YOU *****!
I'LL REBUILD EVERYTHING YOU STOLE - YOU SUCK!

ALL YOU CAN DO IS BEAT SOMEONE LITTLER THAN YOU
WELL NOW THAT SOMEONE'S OLDER - AND THE PAYBACK IS DUE
A PULSING VEIN OF HATE AND LOATHING - ALL FOR YOU
A SLIDING RAGE CRAVING YOUR DEMISE - ALL FOR YOU

A JUSTIFIED
DEATH SENTENCE - DEATH SENTENCE

The penalty is death
You should have never drawn first breath
Scum like you make me mad
Lost the humanity we had
Its all because of you
That we're like this

---Burn---
---You'll burn---

(You almost converted me, but not into you)

A JUSTIFIED
DEATH SENTENCE - DEATH SENTENCE [comments] => 2 [counter] => 383 [topic] => 34 [informant] => sicknivesevered [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Justified Death Sentence

Contributed by sicknivesevered on Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 03:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



COME ON
I'LL SHOW YOU SOMETHING

What makes you think that I will just go along with everything?
I am not that simple and weak - I am just misconstrued
Everything I would ever have wanted to remember
You just destroyed it all before it began - You are that lewd

SO NOW ITS MY TURN TO STRIKE (BACK) FOR WHAT YOU DID
YOU ARE THE LOWEST THERE IS
YOU ARE PURE *****
SO NOW I CAN TAKE JUSTICE INTO MY OWN HANDS
YOU ARE A DEAD MAN WALKING
YOU ARE PURE *****

A JUSTIFIED
DEATH SENTENCE - DEATH SENTENCE

You played with a child's mind and let it scar
You molested the innocence that was born to all
I'LL KILL YOU FOR THE THINGS YOU DID - YOU *****!
I'LL REBUILD EVERYTHING YOU STOLE - YOU SUCK!

ALL YOU CAN DO IS BEAT SOMEONE LITTLER THAN YOU
WELL NOW THAT SOMEONE'S OLDER - AND THE PAYBACK IS DUE
A PULSING VEIN OF HATE AND LOATHING - ALL FOR YOU
A SLIDING RAGE CRAVING YOUR DEMISE - ALL FOR YOU

A JUSTIFIED
DEATH SENTENCE - DEATH SENTENCE

The penalty is death
You should have never drawn first breath
Scum like you make me mad
Lost the humanity we had
Its all because of you
That we're like this

---Burn---
---You'll burn---

(You almost converted me, but not into you)

A JUSTIFIED
DEATH SENTENCE - DEATH SENTENCE




Copyright © sicknivesevered ... [ 2003-09-30 03:25:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Justified Death Sentence (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniel on Tuesday, 30th September 2003 @ 03:37:28 PM AEST
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oi pa, shattered heart syndrome have we here? this is creative, thou seems to dig throu an old junk pile that's still really messy. good write! kudos! ;0) -daniel


Re: Justified Death Sentence (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Wednesday, 1st October 2003 @ 12:14:34 PM AEST
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RIGHT ON!!!! awesome...thank you .....you give voice to the anger.......




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