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And partying til the end?
You treat me like your barbie doll,
And you say that I’m your friend!

You leave me when I need you most,
I was always there for you.
All you do is boast,
And never see my view.
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My View

Contributed by EmSal on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 12:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

What’s with you and alcohol,
And partying til the end?
You treat me like your barbie doll,
And you say that I’m your friend!

You leave me when I need you most,
I was always there for you.
All you do is boast,
And never see my view.

Copyright Â© EmSal ... [ 2003-09-19 12:35:00]
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Re: My View (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 01:19:59 PM AEST
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This is not good.... NO, I'm not talking about the poem...talking about the situation...
Jenni

Re: My View (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 07:26:43 PM AEST
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Heartbreaking Emma, but a beautiful poem non the less. Peace be with you.

Re: My View (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th September 2003 @ 12:23:18 AM AEST
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emsal...sounds like you need to get away from him. a narcissist cannot be there for you, unless you are serving his need for attention at the time. and alcoholism is not a thing to have to deal with if you have the chance not too, either. you have so much to offer a person, one that will see you for the gift you are. i have not met you, but your poems reveal tenderness, and the ability and willingness to express your heart.
it's time you wrote a tear jerkin lost love song, girl! and don't think for a moment that i don't know how hard that is...but you deserve to be happy (and loved) painted_echos

Re: My View (User Rating: 1 )
by garyh on Monday, 29th September 2003 @ 01:33:54 AM AEST
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good write... sounds like a very bad relationship :(

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