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Array ( [sid] => 23496 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Crystal Clear [time] => 2003-09-19 12:05:00 [hometext] => An older one... [bodytext] =>
Am I not empty enough
Could my heart not be filled with rose petals
Like carpet for royalty
Where you could walk to me...
I would bow before your love
Offering my all,my soul to you

Am I not cold enough
Could these fields of wildflowers not dance in your sunlight
Blanketed by your warmth
Where your breath like a summers breeze
Kisses tall grass and colours my dreams
Of you,your nearness

Am I not withered enough
Could my thirst not be quenched by your sweet wine
Like a river of blood
New life coursing my veins...
I would live for your love
Nurture you,while nurtured

Am I not clear enough
Could your eyes not be opened by my faith
Like visions in a crystal ball
Unreal and yet mesmerizing
You are clouded by my tears
For you,I will keep dreaming,hoping

Am I not enough?? [comments] => 6 [counter] => 198 [topic] => 2 [informant] => LovingWhispers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
Crystal Clear

Contributed by LovingWhispers on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry




Am I not empty enough
Could my heart not be filled with rose petals
Like carpet for royalty
Where you could walk to me...
I would bow before your love
Offering my all,my soul to you

Am I not cold enough
Could these fields of wildflowers not dance in your sunlight
Blanketed by your warmth
Where your breath like a summers breeze
Kisses tall grass and colours my dreams
Of you,your nearness

Am I not withered enough
Could my thirst not be quenched by your sweet wine
Like a river of blood
New life coursing my veins...
I would live for your love
Nurture you,while nurtured

Am I not clear enough
Could your eyes not be opened by my faith
Like visions in a crystal ball
Unreal and yet mesmerizing
You are clouded by my tears
For you,I will keep dreaming,hoping

Am I not enough??




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Re: Crystal Clear (User Rating: 1 )
by Walt on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 12:46:29 PM AEST
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Enjoyed, great write...
walt


Re: Crystal Clear (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 01:10:33 PM AEST
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again a very beautiful write
Shari


Re: Crystal Clear (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 07:28:00 PM AEST
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I really like this,good work, Crow


Re: Crystal Clear (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 07:30:18 PM AEST
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Amazing poem!


Re: Crystal Clear (User Rating: 1 )
by DreamWeaver on Friday, 19th September 2003 @ 09:49:08 PM AEST
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I like the way you structured this poem ... all of the words touched my heart very deeply ... "for you, I will keep dreaming, hoping" ... *sobs in anguish* :(((( Jan


Re: Crystal Clear (User Rating: 1 )
by Percursors on Sunday, 21st September 2003 @ 01:25:39 AM AEST
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OH MY GOD! I LOVED THIS IT WAS SO AMAZING...
*gives you a standing ovation*




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