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Array ( [sid] => 22695 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Feel [time] => 2003-09-03 17:05:00 [hometext] => I'm not sure why I've been feeling so down lately, but I'm sure I don't like the way it feels. [bodytext] => I've walked such a long way...
Only to arrive at the end of nowhere
I keep telling myself
This pain will fade away once I get somewhere

But the emptiness fills me
The constant ache numbs me
I try to hide it from you
I try not to need you
But you're all I have
In the whole world
Nobody else cares
The way you do

Nothing in life is sure
Except for the way I feel in my heart
So that's what I cling to
And somehow that's what's tearing us apart

The sadness is all that's real
And I need it to heal
You don't have to understand
Just to reach out a hand
All I want from you
Is to love me
Hold me when I cry
Just be with me

There's nothing here for me
That I can hold onto
And I'm falling
I need your hand
But you push me farther
And you don't feel my pain
I'm losing grip
And so are you

So I hide in the dark
'Cause I can't take this life
Day by day I break down
And I'm losing the will
To keep trying at all
Now I'm empty inside
Only you give me reason
To stand up and keep fighting
So if you take that away
I'll give in to the darkness
And there will be nothing left
But the shattered remains
Of the girl you loved
'Cause I can't go on
If I'm nothing
Without you I have nothing

It's just the way I feel [comments] => 4 [counter] => 185 [topic] => 32 [informant] => MoonlitAngel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )
Feel

Contributed by MoonlitAngel on Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 05:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry



I've walked such a long way...
Only to arrive at the end of nowhere
I keep telling myself
This pain will fade away once I get somewhere

But the emptiness fills me
The constant ache numbs me
I try to hide it from you
I try not to need you
But you're all I have
In the whole world
Nobody else cares
The way you do

Nothing in life is sure
Except for the way I feel in my heart
So that's what I cling to
And somehow that's what's tearing us apart

The sadness is all that's real
And I need it to heal
You don't have to understand
Just to reach out a hand
All I want from you
Is to love me
Hold me when I cry
Just be with me

There's nothing here for me
That I can hold onto
And I'm falling
I need your hand
But you push me farther
And you don't feel my pain
I'm losing grip
And so are you

So I hide in the dark
'Cause I can't take this life
Day by day I break down
And I'm losing the will
To keep trying at all
Now I'm empty inside
Only you give me reason
To stand up and keep fighting
So if you take that away
I'll give in to the darkness
And there will be nothing left
But the shattered remains
Of the girl you loved
'Cause I can't go on
If I'm nothing
Without you I have nothing

It's just the way I feel




Copyright © MoonlitAngel ... [ 2003-09-03 17:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by VampiricSuccubus on Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 05:08:22 PM AEST
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I love this poem and sadly I've felt the same way. Great write

Krista


Re: Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimmie_mac on Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 05:26:42 PM AEST
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I hope you are feeling better. I understand how you feel since my car accident I have been down. I have been off work since the 31st of july and It sucks. But I will tell you like I tell myself. It might take some time but it will get better. Smile someone is thinking of you...Me!! You have all of us here so write to your hearts content and we will listen.
Kimmie_mac


Re: Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by faffeee on Wednesday, 3rd September 2003 @ 06:06:46 PM AEST
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its awful you feel so down, sounds as if this boy is the only thing keeping you going at the moment - just try to be thankful hes there for you and does love u. try to not lose sight of that even in your sadness. good luck xxx


Re: Feel (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Thursday, 4th September 2003 @ 10:56:58 AM AEST
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I can tell from the depth of your emotions that you have a beautiful and open heart.Let that be your light...not your darkness. :) Hang in there...you will findyour way;) (((huggers)))




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