Your Poetry Dot Com

Welcome to Your Poetry Dot Com - Read, Rate, Comment on, or Submit Poetry. Browse Poetry Forums, or just enjoy other parts of our poetic community.
One of the largest databases of poetry on the net, now over 198,500+ poems!

Poems On Site: 198,500+ Comments On Poems: 427,000+ Forum Posts: 105,000+

Custom Search


Welcome !	Home · FAQ · Topics · Web Links · Your Account · Submit Poetry · Top 30 · OldSite Link	03-June 06:31:38 AEST

Menu

· Our eBay Store

· Error Submit

Poetry

· Submit Poetry

· Least Read Poems

· Members Listing

· Old Site Post 2001

· Old Site Pre 2001

· Poetry Archive

· Public Domain Poetry

Stories

· Stories (NEW ! )

· Submit Story

· Story Topics

· Stories Archive

· Story Search

Community

· Our Poetry Forums

· Our Arcade
100's of Games !

Site Help

· FAQ

· Feedback

Members Areas

· Your Account

· Members Journals

· Premium Sign-Up

Premium Section

· Special Section

· Premium Poems

· Premium Submit

· Premium Search

· Premium Archive

· Premium Topics

Fun & Games

· Jokes

· Bubble Puzzle

· Cross Word Easy

· Word Hunt

Reference

· Dictionary (Rhyming)

· Site Updates

· Special Content

Search

Top

Help This Site

· Donations

Others

· Moderators

Our Other Sites

· Embroidery Design Store
· Your Jokes
· Special Urls
· JM Embroideries
· Public Domain Poetry and Stories
· Diamond Dotz
· Cooking Info and Recipes
· Quoof - Australian Story

Social

Array ( [sid] => 2257 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The Silence Within [time] => 2002-08-14 06:34:23 [hometext] => Dedicated to my son, whom struggles with
the most unpredictable disablity-Autism,
He is truely a gift of God! [bodytext] => The inner core .... Oh life,
the being, the yearning, the structure,
The internal veiw, one cannot express,
how hard, the struggle, the silence within,
Trapped inside, my beautiful angel,
feelings unexplainable, at times,
Perception loops around him,
though with frustration,
his vision, evolves inside,
Yearning to belong,
complex to thee outer world,
I sink inside,
A black hole of darkness, at times,
are my days,
helpless, are my feelings,
I ........, now thee intruder, thee object,
the driver, of the car,
Thee unexplained,
Autism ... the life,
to be the brain of another, so loved,
I follow the deed, with experience,
and knowledge,
To surpass, and bring out,
the silence within,
to capture, my beautiful son,
I labor and stimulate,
I search thee unknown,
With all hope, I carry through,
though tired, and worn,
We, together, are on a voyage,
to continue, to experience,
to feel, to eject,
Thee inner core,
to blend in, factor and observe,
The world, from another point of view,
the beauty, I find,
the delicate world, of another,
My son, his world,
his vision,
the silence within!

[comments] => 2 [counter] => 152 [topic] => 21 [informant] => Valerie_Pearson [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )

The Silence Within

Contributed by Valerie_Pearson on Wednesday, 14th August 2002 @ 06:34:23 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

The inner core .... Oh life,
the being, the yearning, the structure,
The internal veiw, one cannot express,
how hard, the struggle, the silence within,
Trapped inside, my beautiful angel,
feelings unexplainable, at times,
Perception loops around him,
though with frustration,
his vision, evolves inside,
Yearning to belong,
complex to thee outer world,
I sink inside,
A black hole of darkness, at times,
are my days,
helpless, are my feelings,
I ........, now thee intruder, thee object,
the driver, of the car,
Thee unexplained,
Autism ... the life,
to be the brain of another, so loved,
I follow the deed, with experience,
and knowledge,
To surpass, and bring out,
the silence within,
to capture, my beautiful son,
I labor and stimulate,
I search thee unknown,
With all hope, I carry through,
though tired, and worn,
We, together, are on a voyage,
to continue, to experience,
to feel, to eject,
Thee inner core,
to blend in, factor and observe,
The world, from another point of view,
the beauty, I find,
the delicate world, of another,
My son, his world,
his vision,
the silence within!

Copyright © Valerie_Pearson ... [ 2002-08-14 06:34:23]
(Date/Time posted on site)

Advertisments:

Previous Posted Poem | | Next Posted Poem

Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more

All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title etc.

Re: The Silence Within (User Rating: 1 )
by Phildel on Wednesday, 14th August 2002 @ 06:55:17 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

Wow, you convey the difficulty you observe your son facing wonderfully, my mum works with autistic children so I understand different depths of autism ur writing about.

Phildel

Re: The Silence Within (User Rating: 1 )
by Roshie on Thursday, 14th November 2002 @ 11:53:33 AM AEST
(User Info | Send a Message)

oh my! that is to brilliantly written, you have expressed your feelings and love so well in this poem. =)

While every care is taken to ensure the general sites content is family safe, our moderators cannot be in all places; all the time. Please report poetry and or comments that are in breach of our site rules HERE (Please include poem title or url). Parents also please ensure that you supervise your children well when they are on the internet; regardless of what a site says about being, or being considered, child-safe.

Poetry is much like a great photo, a single "moment in time" capturing many feelings and emotions. Yet, they are very alive; creating stirrings within the readers who form visual "pictures" of the expressed emotions within the Poem. ©

Opinions expressed in the poetry, comments, forums etc. on this site are not necessarily those of this site, its owners and/or operators; but of the individuals who post items to this site.
Frequently Asked Questions | | | Privacy Policy | | | Contact Webmaster

All submitted items are Copyright © to their submitter. All the rest Copyright © 2002-2050 by Your Poetry Dot Com

All logos and trademarks in this site are property of their respective owners.

Script Generation Time: 0.052 Seconds. - View our Site Map | .© your-poetry.com