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Array ( [sid] => 22294 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I Am Chaos [time] => 2003-08-24 12:45:00 [hometext] => A couple of days ago I made a girl cry by telling her that her "promise ring" is stupid and the meaning is worthless. Afterwards she told me that the guy who gave it to her is in Iraq. I still don't feel bad and I wrote this to clear my thoughts of it all together. I guess I'm a bad person. Oh, I laugh. [bodytext] => I DON'T REALLY CARE, BUT I WANT MORE - I AM THE SADIST THAT YOU ABHORE
MY SOUL IS HARD, MY HEART IS STONE - IT DOESN'T MATTER IF I END UP ALONE
AND - YOU - ARE - NOT - ME - SO WHY SHOULD I CARE IF YOU'RE CRYING?
AND YOUR GUILT TRIP WON'T WORK - I AM THE ULTIMATE JERK

I (I HAVE NO MASTER) have (I HAVE NO MASTER)
no (I HAVE NO MASTER) master (I HAVE NO MASTER)
I AM CHAOS

I AM SICK, I AM HATE - SANITY RETURNED JUST A LITTLE TOO LATE
BUT NOW MY MIND IS FREE - OF THE "CONSCIOUS" DISEASE
VAULVES OPEN, MY SPIRIT SCREAMS - OF ME, YOU COULD NEVER OF DREAMED
AND FINALLY MY PAIN IS FELT - ACROSS THE LIGHT, YOUR HOPE MELTS

I (I HAVE NO MASTER) have (I HAVE NO MASTER)
no (I HAVE NO MASTER) master (I HAVE NO MASTER)
I AM CHAOS

TRUTH, HONOR, INTEGRITY - HIGH STANDARDS WEREN'T MEANT FOR ME
Peep inside the freak - Scrape across the agony that my heart leaks
Did you ever think - Of why I smiled when I went over the brink?
Why I went over the brink... to see your MUTILATED ENDING
I WILL BE THE ONE WHO KILLS YOU
I WILL BE THE ONE TO END IT ALL
I WILL BE THE ONE THAT SEVERES
I WILL BE THE ONE THAT MAKES YOU FALL

---BEND TO THE DETRIMENTAL ME---

I (I HAVE NO MASTER) have (I HAVE NO MASTER)
no (I HAVE NO MASTER) master (I HAVE NO MASTER)
I AM CHAOS

---BEND TO THE DETRIMENTAL ME--- [comments] => 2 [counter] => 167 [topic] => 34 [informant] => sicknivesevered [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )

I Am Chaos

Contributed by sicknivesevered on Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 12:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

I DON'T REALLY CARE, BUT I WANT MORE - I AM THE SADIST THAT YOU ABHORE
MY SOUL IS HARD, MY HEART IS STONE - IT DOESN'T MATTER IF I END UP ALONE
AND - YOU - ARE - NOT - ME - SO WHY SHOULD I CARE IF YOU'RE CRYING?
AND YOUR GUILT TRIP WON'T WORK - I AM THE ULTIMATE JERK

I (I HAVE NO MASTER) have (I HAVE NO MASTER)
no (I HAVE NO MASTER) master (I HAVE NO MASTER)
I AM CHAOS

I AM SICK, I AM HATE - SANITY RETURNED JUST A LITTLE TOO LATE
BUT NOW MY MIND IS FREE - OF THE "CONSCIOUS" DISEASE
VAULVES OPEN, MY SPIRIT SCREAMS - OF ME, YOU COULD NEVER OF DREAMED
AND FINALLY MY PAIN IS FELT - ACROSS THE LIGHT, YOUR HOPE MELTS

I (I HAVE NO MASTER) have (I HAVE NO MASTER)
no (I HAVE NO MASTER) master (I HAVE NO MASTER)
I AM CHAOS

TRUTH, HONOR, INTEGRITY - HIGH STANDARDS WEREN'T MEANT FOR ME
Peep inside the freak - Scrape across the agony that my heart leaks
Did you ever think - Of why I smiled when I went over the brink?
Why I went over the brink... to see your MUTILATED ENDING
I WILL BE THE ONE WHO KILLS YOU
I WILL BE THE ONE TO END IT ALL
I WILL BE THE ONE THAT SEVERES
I WILL BE THE ONE THAT MAKES YOU FALL

---BEND TO THE DETRIMENTAL ME---

I (I HAVE NO MASTER) have (I HAVE NO MASTER)
no (I HAVE NO MASTER) master (I HAVE NO MASTER)
I AM CHAOS

---BEND TO THE DETRIMENTAL ME---

Copyright © sicknivesevered ... [ 2003-08-24 12:45:00]
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Re: I Am Chaos (User Rating: 1 )
by smilez_n_frownz on Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 06:13:53 PM AEST
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Hey well I personally like your poem,I mean everyone has and derserves their own opinion,and yours just so happens to be harsh...I mean i have no place to talk,but don't you think if it made a big deal and ment a lot to her you could have just said like oh yea....or if u said it waz stupid,be liek well that's jsu my opinion.But hey,maybe you did,anyways,Gr8 write i liked it.
Take care
~sam

Re: I Am Chaos (User Rating: 1 )
by Cancer on Sunday, 24th August 2003 @ 06:48:59 PM AEST
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i loved your song. and i think that what you told that girl is funny. people are too sensitive these days. if she cried over such a small comment, to hell with her. the ring is stupid. too much emphasis is put on symbols. if he gets shot and dies, the promise is broken, and the ring was a lie. but, i digress. great write. i enjoy the anger you seem to seethe with.

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