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Array ( [sid] => 22142 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Secret [time] => 2003-08-20 16:05:00 [hometext] => Hey,hehehe today's my birthday :)bored and tired.....*yawn*any ways just wrote something more of a last words thing... [bodytext] => I have a secret inside,
something to hide,
I can only say,
make you to promise,
keep it by night and day.
Just listen to what i have to say,
it's small but so hard to say,
I'm trying to tell you,
maybe day after today,
I take a breath
get ready to say,
looking at you,
makes me so blue,
now this day,
sad and just a fray,
but first,
I have to talk to the nurse,
tears in my eyes,
your going to die,
how can I say Good-Bye?
tell you my secret,
I promise to say,
I Love You,
more and more each day. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 39 [informant] => smilez_n_frownz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Secret

Contributed by smilez_n_frownz on Wednesday, 20th August 2003 @ 04:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

I have a secret inside,
something to hide,
I can only say,
make you to promise,
keep it by night and day.
Just listen to what i have to say,
it's small but so hard to say,
I'm trying to tell you,
maybe day after today,
I take a breath
get ready to say,
looking at you,
makes me so blue,
now this day,
sad and just a fray,
but first,
I have to talk to the nurse,
tears in my eyes,
your going to die,
how can I say Good-Bye?
tell you my secret,
I promise to say,
I Love You,
more and more each day.

Copyright © smilez_n_frownz ... [ 2003-08-20 16:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Secret (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 20th August 2003 @ 06:48:22 PM AEST
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Happy Birthday, Smilez...
Jenni_K

Re: Secret (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 20th August 2003 @ 07:38:01 PM AEST
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good write, happy birthday! Crow

Re: Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by DrogedaRain on Thursday, 21st August 2003 @ 03:32:45 AM AEST
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I have an Aunt dying right now she has been a second mother to me. And I told her today Goodbye and what all she has meant to me. Even though she may still be here in a day or week even a month. I am just glad that I was given the chance. Just a reminder to take the chances your given. Because it is not the things you have done that you regret the most it is the things you had chances to do and didn't that get you. Beautiful write~!

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