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Array ( [sid] => 21968 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => uncle kreepy's game [time] => 2003-08-16 11:45:00 [hometext] => i would explain it's meaning, but i don't think it would be posted. look at the title. it's cryptically obvious. [bodytext] => uncle kreepy smells like whiskey
and his eyes are small and beady
he sweats, and licks his lips alot
when my parents send me over to stay

aunt kreepy is heavily medicated
she doesn't talk or move around
she just sits at the kitchen table
and mumbles to the walls

uncle kreepy has a dresser full of "porn"
he makes me look at the pictures with him
i'm only 6, i don't understand what these pictures mean
or why uncle's eyes get all glassy like they do

uncle kreepy's hands are scratchy
like big cat tongues when we "wrestle"
sometime uncle plays too rough
and when he wins
he makes me play his "game"

he tells me i have to keep our secret
that mom and dad would hate me if i told
he says they'd send me away
and i'd never see them again

he says that they wouldn't love me anymore


uncle kreepy's got a buick
that smells like vaseline
and uncle kreepy loves the kiddies
if you know what i mean

when i got older, uncle kreepy moved away
i don't know where he is now
but i know that i'll find him some day
and when i find that "uncle" of mine
i'll teach him a new "game", you see
i'll stab and slash, leave a big bleeding hole
like the one Uncle Kreepy left in me [comments] => 6 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Cancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
uncle kreepy's game

Contributed by Cancer on Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 11:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



uncle kreepy smells like whiskey
and his eyes are small and beady
he sweats, and licks his lips alot
when my parents send me over to stay

aunt kreepy is heavily medicated
she doesn't talk or move around
she just sits at the kitchen table
and mumbles to the walls

uncle kreepy has a dresser full of "porn"
he makes me look at the pictures with him
i'm only 6, i don't understand what these pictures mean
or why uncle's eyes get all glassy like they do

uncle kreepy's hands are scratchy
like big cat tongues when we "wrestle"
sometime uncle plays too rough
and when he wins
he makes me play his "game"

he tells me i have to keep our secret
that mom and dad would hate me if i told
he says they'd send me away
and i'd never see them again

he says that they wouldn't love me anymore


uncle kreepy's got a buick
that smells like vaseline
and uncle kreepy loves the kiddies
if you know what i mean

when i got older, uncle kreepy moved away
i don't know where he is now
but i know that i'll find him some day
and when i find that "uncle" of mine
i'll teach him a new "game", you see
i'll stab and slash, leave a big bleeding hole
like the one Uncle Kreepy left in me




Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2003-08-16 11:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: uncle kreepy's game (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 12:23:51 PM AEST
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seriously about a horrifying topic... all "uncle kreepies" should die a slow painful death. a topic im extremely sensitive about... im sure it must have been hard for you to write it in such a "clean" way so it wouldn't go in the members special section... great write... ~Apryl


Re: uncle kreepy's game (User Rating: 1 )
by thelmalou on Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 01:19:50 PM AEST
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Such a sad part of life today.Thelma


Re: uncle kreepy's game (User Rating: 1 )
by sicknivesevered on Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 02:43:13 PM AEST
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I agree with hardcoreputa. Every last one should be horrifically crucified. I don't understand people like that, and I hope I never will. You did a great job on the poem though.


Re: uncle kreepy's game (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 07:59:29 PM AEST
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thank you for speaking the words i still have a hard time putting down on paper................
thank you for telling a story about a child's
family grown raper.....
thank you for bringing this story to light....
thank you for bringing back the night.....
now i'll work on my own story to tell....
of how the sandman fell.........

great write....


Re: uncle kreepy's game (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 09:41:06 PM AEST
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People like that deserve a long lingering painful death..........they need to scream in agony for what they do to kids.
But death is to good a punishment for the likes of them.
A well written poem.


Re: uncle kreepy's game (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Tuesday, 19th August 2003 @ 08:47:19 PM AEST
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lol the title made me laugh... This was very descriptive and disturbing. I liked it I guess and I agree with the last comment that child rapists deserve to die a slow death...

Bobo (Joel)




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