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Array ( [sid] => 21617 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Death's Kiss [time] => 2003-08-08 10:25:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Holding his shaking body close, sadness overwhelming my heart
Not knowing what to say....to make these feelings part
Witnessing my love's death, so heart wrenching and horrific
I feel as tho I going to die, this pain that which will stick
I'm sorry my love, I wasnt here when you needed me today
For I wouldve taken that bullet, never have had you feel that pain
You have a wonderful life. You cant leave! I wont let you go!
You say this is how its meant to be?! How do you know?!
My love I need you here with me, without you I will not cope
You made me want to live, filled my heart with love and hope
My love you're going cold, I'll stay by you and keep you warm
I'll keep you safe forever more, keep away all harm
Please stay with me, Dont pass on to the next world
You have a life to live here, You have a life to live with your girl
You're beginning to slip my love, What's that you're trying to say?
I love you with all my heart I cant bare to see you this way
As he slips into death's kiss, I cry...not knowing what I can do
I've lost my one true love...with his last breath...he said
"Goodnight my love , Im sorry I must go, Sweet Dreams....I love you too....." [comments] => 4 [counter] => 155 [topic] => 48 [informant] => PsychoticDreamz [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Death's Kiss

Contributed by PsychoticDreamz on Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 10:25:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Holding his shaking body close, sadness overwhelming my heart
Not knowing what to say....to make these feelings part
Witnessing my love's death, so heart wrenching and horrific
I feel as tho I going to die, this pain that which will stick
I'm sorry my love, I wasnt here when you needed me today
For I wouldve taken that bullet, never have had you feel that pain
You have a wonderful life. You cant leave! I wont let you go!
You say this is how its meant to be?! How do you know?!
My love I need you here with me, without you I will not cope
You made me want to live, filled my heart with love and hope
My love you're going cold, I'll stay by you and keep you warm
I'll keep you safe forever more, keep away all harm
Please stay with me, Dont pass on to the next world
You have a life to live here, You have a life to live with your girl
You're beginning to slip my love, What's that you're trying to say?
I love you with all my heart I cant bare to see you this way
As he slips into death's kiss, I cry...not knowing what I can do
I've lost my one true love...with his last breath...he said
"Goodnight my love , Im sorry I must go, Sweet Dreams....I love you too....."




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Re: Death's Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Friday, 8th August 2003 @ 11:50:14 AM AEST
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such a touching poem. so very sad. filled with such emotion, a beautiful poem, but a heart braking situation ~Apryl


Re: Death's Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 01:08:22 AM AEST
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I think you're gonna make me cry... that's the saddest thing... my own personal worst nightmare. Thanks for, uh, putting my worst nightmare into words... I guess...

(In all seriousness, good write... sad though!!!)

~ Moonlit


Re: Death's Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Saturday, 9th August 2003 @ 03:42:45 AM AEST
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you had me there.......holding him in my arms....begging him not to go.....very very touching.......


Re: Death's Kiss (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Friday, 15th August 2003 @ 06:25:34 PM AEST
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Wow this was captiviting very well written. You draw the reader in so well.

Bobo (Joel)




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