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Array ( [sid] => 21577 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => i don't want it anymore [time] => 2003-08-07 14:25:00 [hometext] => just a song i wrote. the first one i've written with the intent of performing. [bodytext] => this is my life and i
don't want it anymore
these are my tears and i
can't cry them anymore
this is my pain and i
can't feel it anymore
this is my life and i
don't want it ANYMORE

cutting, scratching, peeling, clawing
tearing flesh from my face
laughing, crying, ***** dying
locked myself in, isolate
burning, biting, always fighting
this world is my sworn enemy
stupified, crucified, left alone to die
you won't be the death of me

fighting alone
(take everything from me)
never wanted this
(i cannot be stopped)
you can't make me believe
(sic your dogmas on me)
you can't bow my knee
(only i can end this)

this is my life and i
don't want it anymore
these are my tears and i
can't cry them anymore
this is my pain and i
can't feel it anymore
this is my life and i
don't want it ANYMORE

stop, wait, bleed, scream
i won't let you kill me
won't rob me, of my death
you'll never have the chance to shoot
preaching, as you burn
i watched you fall so far from grace
waiting, for your turn
but, it too late, my life erased

tired of it all
(just not strong enough)
won't last long enough
(it's so cold here)
bitter pill of failure
(colors fade, wash away)
i tried, i tried
(i'll fall, but not as far as you)

this is my life and i
don't want it anymore
these are my tears and i
can't cry them anymore
this is my pain and i
can't feel it anymore
this is my life and i
don't want it ANYMORE

this is what's left and i
just wanna leave it all behind
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 34 [informant] => Cancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
i don't want it anymore

Contributed by Cancer on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 02:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



this is my life and i
don't want it anymore
these are my tears and i
can't cry them anymore
this is my pain and i
can't feel it anymore
this is my life and i
don't want it ANYMORE

cutting, scratching, peeling, clawing
tearing flesh from my face
laughing, crying, ***** dying
locked myself in, isolate
burning, biting, always fighting
this world is my sworn enemy
stupified, crucified, left alone to die
you won't be the death of me

fighting alone
(take everything from me)
never wanted this
(i cannot be stopped)
you can't make me believe
(sic your dogmas on me)
you can't bow my knee
(only i can end this)

this is my life and i
don't want it anymore
these are my tears and i
can't cry them anymore
this is my pain and i
can't feel it anymore
this is my life and i
don't want it ANYMORE

stop, wait, bleed, scream
i won't let you kill me
won't rob me, of my death
you'll never have the chance to shoot
preaching, as you burn
i watched you fall so far from grace
waiting, for your turn
but, it too late, my life erased

tired of it all
(just not strong enough)
won't last long enough
(it's so cold here)
bitter pill of failure
(colors fade, wash away)
i tried, i tried
(i'll fall, but not as far as you)

this is my life and i
don't want it anymore
these are my tears and i
can't cry them anymore
this is my pain and i
can't feel it anymore
this is my life and i
don't want it ANYMORE

this is what's left and i
just wanna leave it all behind




Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2003-08-07 14:25:00]
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Re: i don't want it anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 05:44:20 PM AEST
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stupefied......i like this one......


Re: i don't want it anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by Saira on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 06:00:03 PM AEST
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Wow, it's wonderful Cancer! Go and perform it. Very much look like a hard rock or metal song to me. I'm sure it would be loved very much! Here I give you 5 star vote for it :o)
Best Wishes
Saira


Re: i don't want it anymore (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Thursday, 7th August 2003 @ 08:54:58 PM AEST
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Wow... this was heartbreaking. So well written. I absolutely loved the first verse or chorus. I just imagined it being sung quietly with maybe a guitar in the back ground then the rest screamed out melded in with raging guitars. Awesome Roy how the hell do u write so much great stuff??

In admiration,
Bobo (Joel)




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