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Array ( [sid] => 21455 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Off Our Skin [time] => 2003-08-04 12:25:00 [hometext] => Lyrics. [bodytext] => PURE--------------------------------------------------
Blue and calm, find shelter in me - THE DEAD STILL WALK INSIDE OF OUR DREAMS - not the living PLACE - PURE AND UNHOLY
MESHED INSIDE - THIS SINGLE TRIBULATION OFF OUR SKIN
NOT BURIED WITHIN - THIS TRAGIC SIMULATION

Blurring of despair, evil thoughts in the air, the shine of your face tells me that you don't care - Knocked out of sight, I bleed in the night, holding, knowing that I am right - I am right - I am right - I'm always right
IN MY HEAD I KNOW I'M RIGHT

PURE------------------------------------------------
SOMETHING I CANNOT FIND - IT WILL TAKE A WHILE TO BLISS IN THE LIGHT - FOUND TO RELY - ON THIS FATAL INCARCERATION

Blurring of despair, evil thoughts in the air, the shine of your face tells me that you don't care - Knocked out of sight, I bleed in the night, holding, knowing that I am right - I am right - I am right - I'm always right
IN MY HEAD I KNOW I'M RIGHT

PURE----------------------------------------------
Blue and calm, find something in me - The dead still die inside of my dreams
Pacify, my time away - Sun deep, off my face
MOONLIGHT - LUNAR COVERED NIGHT

NOW SOMETHING - NOW SOMETHING NEEDED TO BE
NOW SOMETHING - NOW SOMETHING NEEDED IN ME

NOW SOMETHING - NOW SOMETHING NEEDED TO BE
NOW SOMETHING - NOW SOMETHING NEEDED IN ME
chronic nothing
[comments] => 4 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 46 [informant] => sicknivesevered [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => didactic )

Off Our Skin

Contributed by sicknivesevered on Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 12:25:00 PM in AEST
Topic: didactic

PURE--------------------------------------------------
Blue and calm, find shelter in me - THE DEAD STILL WALK INSIDE OF OUR DREAMS - not the living PLACE - PURE AND UNHOLY
MESHED INSIDE - THIS SINGLE TRIBULATION OFF OUR SKIN
NOT BURIED WITHIN - THIS TRAGIC SIMULATION

Blurring of despair, evil thoughts in the air, the shine of your face tells me that you don't care - Knocked out of sight, I bleed in the night, holding, knowing that I am right - I am right - I am right - I'm always right
IN MY HEAD I KNOW I'M RIGHT

PURE------------------------------------------------
SOMETHING I CANNOT FIND - IT WILL TAKE A WHILE TO BLISS IN THE LIGHT - FOUND TO RELY - ON THIS FATAL INCARCERATION

Blurring of despair, evil thoughts in the air, the shine of your face tells me that you don't care - Knocked out of sight, I bleed in the night, holding, knowing that I am right - I am right - I am right - I'm always right
IN MY HEAD I KNOW I'M RIGHT

PURE----------------------------------------------
Blue and calm, find something in me - The dead still die inside of my dreams
Pacify, my time away - Sun deep, off my face
MOONLIGHT - LUNAR COVERED NIGHT

NOW SOMETHING - NOW SOMETHING NEEDED TO BE
NOW SOMETHING - NOW SOMETHING NEEDED IN ME

NOW SOMETHING - NOW SOMETHING NEEDED TO BE
NOW SOMETHING - NOW SOMETHING NEEDED IN ME
chronic nothing

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Re: Off Our Skin (User Rating: 1 )
by jaeann on Monday, 4th August 2003 @ 07:39:49 PM AEST
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that's pretty cool...it has a cadence to it...
wish i could hear the music

Re: Off Our Skin (User Rating: 1 )
by Jacquelynne on Tuesday, 12th August 2003 @ 11:16:24 PM AEST
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hey baby, i liked these lyrics. i can hear your voice singing them.

Re: Off Our Skin (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 03:30:14 PM AEST
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From a metal vocalist to another vocalist its to repetative and its way off beat try flowing with syllables it will help You need a critic so dont be mad You can check mine out if you want and feel free to criticise back because it all goes to mind

Re: Off Our Skin (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Saturday, 16th August 2003 @ 03:30:59 PM AEST
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From a metal vocalist to another vocalist its to repetative and its way off beat try flowing with syllables it will help You need a critic so dont be mad You can check mine out if you want and feel free to criticise back because it all goes to mind

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