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Array ( [sid] => 21156 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Hope [time] => 2003-07-28 20:05:00 [hometext] => I have no idea what this is. [bodytext] => revealing
made appealing
for all to see
a life of me
given out
and talked about
see me dancein the streets
dont talk about my victories only my defeats
metion when i lose or do something bad
but look at all the good times i had
i may be a rebel but im a loser
though i am a srcapper and a bruiser
cruiser weight
always stay out past eight
but you that the only stuff you see
when im broke and i bleed
what about the blood i gave
to keep the victims out of graves
what of all the peace i made
but all you see is my rage
look at the media making the world look dim
but our worlds really not that grim
take a look at the good we've done
talk about the good and the fun
your looking at a half empty glass
make if half full and go to class
stop a life of bad ways
and make our life a better stay
see the good in all of us
see me prey and not just cuss... [comments] => 0 [counter] => 144 [topic] => 43 [informant] => Private [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Hope

Contributed by Private on Monday, 28th July 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

revealing
made appealing
for all to see
a life of me
given out
and talked about
see me dancein the streets
dont talk about my victories only my defeats
metion when i lose or do something bad
but look at all the good times i had
i may be a rebel but im a loser
though i am a srcapper and a bruiser
cruiser weight
always stay out past eight
but you that the only stuff you see
when im broke and i bleed
what about the blood i gave
to keep the victims out of graves
what of all the peace i made
but all you see is my rage
look at the media making the world look dim
but our worlds really not that grim
take a look at the good we've done
talk about the good and the fun
your looking at a half empty glass
make if half full and go to class
stop a life of bad ways
and make our life a better stay
see the good in all of us
see me prey and not just cuss...

Copyright © Private ... [ 2003-07-28 20:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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