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Array ( [sid] => 21085 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => by my own love [time] => 2003-07-27 13:35:00 [hometext] => this was an old girl,eveng it wasin't this way of expression,it was reality to me,you will understand it all, just read it and you will make a comment and a call [bodytext] => every emotion attached to my heart
disappointment can't stop thinking of it
how my pain will reach out
she will dump me there no dount



with a blink i wake up to reality
feel the burn i am suffering to be
just an old romantic guy try to love me
all the passions brake down out of fantasy



now after that i can see the sun
reflecting off with a gun
crawling at my kneas down
goodbye my love 3..2..1


from the black to the light
i wake up again in the hospital at night
enough screaming and having the fight


feeling so weak and dark
in the shadow of my heart
the joy and pain never apart


from the first side that your close to me
suffering and saying i am sorry baby


listen i never expected this to come
i will never leave you i am so dump


those hugs i am giving you right now
it was another bullet in my heart blow


this was a promise to eternity
eveng for all the end please belive me
i am......but will this pain i will ever see
no not long as i am here with your heart key
eveng with the pain i am so happy
my sol mate you are my lovley

this was an old story still for today
in ways only your eyes can say
be with me to all the nights and pay
but it's not paying now it's heaven every day [comments] => 1 [counter] => 156 [topic] => 13 [informant] => wassim [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
by my own love

Contributed by wassim on Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



every emotion attached to my heart
disappointment can't stop thinking of it
how my pain will reach out
she will dump me there no dount



with a blink i wake up to reality
feel the burn i am suffering to be
just an old romantic guy try to love me
all the passions brake down out of fantasy



now after that i can see the sun
reflecting off with a gun
crawling at my kneas down
goodbye my love 3..2..1


from the black to the light
i wake up again in the hospital at night
enough screaming and having the fight


feeling so weak and dark
in the shadow of my heart
the joy and pain never apart


from the first side that your close to me
suffering and saying i am sorry baby


listen i never expected this to come
i will never leave you i am so dump


those hugs i am giving you right now
it was another bullet in my heart blow


this was a promise to eternity
eveng for all the end please belive me
i am......but will this pain i will ever see
no not long as i am here with your heart key
eveng with the pain i am so happy
my sol mate you are my lovley

this was an old story still for today
in ways only your eyes can say
be with me to all the nights and pay
but it's not paying now it's heaven every day




Copyright © wassim ... [ 2003-07-27 13:35:00]
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Re: by my own love (User Rating: 1 )
by child_of_God on Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 07:00:32 PM AEST
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you are very talented. i like how you put that into words. good job. i especially like the line "joy and pain are never apart" which is too bad...i felt that way before God healed me from schitzophrenia. i can relate. hope all goes well with ya.




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