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Array ( [sid] => 20820 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Forgive Me [time] => 2003-07-23 03:05:00 [hometext] => eating all my mistakes again, please forgive me. [bodytext] => i should of thought it through
of how much it could change you so.
but i went again without my head
and made things worse and now you know.
there is something wrong with me.
well at least there's something wrong.
i tried my best and failed this test
and i am so far gone... far gone...
far gone...

no...
you could have told me sooner now
you break apart in frustration.
i don't know to fix this nor how.
go...
you're cornering me again to lose.
it's so unfair to retaliate against
when there's nothing for me to choose...
to choose... to choose...

i should of thought it through
of how much it could change you yes.
but i went and left my head in bed
and made the worst come from the mess.
there is something wrong with this.
well at least there's something wrong.
i tried the rest and failed at best
and i am so far gone... far gone...
far gone...

so...
you could have let me sooner break
instead you wait to postpone it.
how much more of me will you take?
oh...
the pieces of me spread so thin.
you spread me further out the way
and here i stretch and break again...
again... again...

forgive me...
think about all the things
that's brought us here today.
forgive me...
everytime i mess it up but
what more is there to say?

forgive me!
at least i come across now
like when i say i am sorry.
forgive me!
this is all that i can do
for the settling of the day.

forgive me!
please forgive me!
forgive me!
could you forgive me? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 158 [topic] => 21 [informant] => daniel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Lifepoems )
Forgive Me

Contributed by daniel on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems



i should of thought it through
of how much it could change you so.
but i went again without my head
and made things worse and now you know.
there is something wrong with me.
well at least there's something wrong.
i tried my best and failed this test
and i am so far gone... far gone...
far gone...

no...
you could have told me sooner now
you break apart in frustration.
i don't know to fix this nor how.
go...
you're cornering me again to lose.
it's so unfair to retaliate against
when there's nothing for me to choose...
to choose... to choose...

i should of thought it through
of how much it could change you yes.
but i went and left my head in bed
and made the worst come from the mess.
there is something wrong with this.
well at least there's something wrong.
i tried the rest and failed at best
and i am so far gone... far gone...
far gone...

so...
you could have let me sooner break
instead you wait to postpone it.
how much more of me will you take?
oh...
the pieces of me spread so thin.
you spread me further out the way
and here i stretch and break again...
again... again...

forgive me...
think about all the things
that's brought us here today.
forgive me...
everytime i mess it up but
what more is there to say?

forgive me!
at least i come across now
like when i say i am sorry.
forgive me!
this is all that i can do
for the settling of the day.

forgive me!
please forgive me!
forgive me!
could you forgive me?




Copyright © daniel ... [ 2003-07-23 03:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Forgive Me (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Wednesday, 23rd July 2003 @ 06:10:37 AM AEST
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Very strong emotions here.Expressed well and I love the way it reads.Hope she forgives..***smiles***


Re: Forgive Me (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Sunday, 27th July 2003 @ 09:16:47 PM AEST
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aww... I hope you're forgiven. :)
nice write here as always....

Dani




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