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all the things you never knew
I take my life to leave with you
to show you that my love is true
I take my life to be with you
I guess thats what I have to do
I take my life because of you
I take my life in front of you

You say you want me cry
and you want me to die
its not a lie
its your alaby
You say you want me to be
as far as can be
so you can not see
the picture of me

Goodbye Im as dead as can be

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You want it

Contributed by SuicidalSon on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 01:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

I take my life to give to you
all the things you never knew
I take my life to leave with you
to show you that my love is true
I take my life to be with you
I guess thats what I have to do
I take my life because of you
I take my life in front of you

You say you want me cry
and you want me to die
its not a lie
its your alaby
You say you want me to be
as far as can be
so you can not see
the picture of me

Goodbye Im as dead as can be

Copyright © SuicidalSon ... [ 2003-07-19 13:35:00]
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Re: You want it (User Rating: 1 )
by cant-skate on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 02:02:41 PM AEST
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Keep ur life keep ur soul
i dont need it anymore
and if ur picture is on the wall
take it
i dont need it anymore
Die i ll burry u under a world or even two
dont tell me why the hate ?
Leave me ! thats all i wanna say !

Re: You want it (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 04:39:03 PM AEST
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Beautiful poem. You're soul is your own, don't sacrifice it for another's foolish blindness. Especially if it's the person's whose comment is above this. *glares at comment above*. You are a wonderful person, your beauty is expressed in your poems. And if whoever this poem was written for cannot see that, then they don't deserve a person such as you. My heart bleeds for you in every sad poem I read of yours. I'm glad you posted again, for I have missed reading your poems.

*J*

Re: You want it (User Rating: 1 )
by hardcoreputa on Saturday, 19th July 2003 @ 05:44:03 PM AEST
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i love your poetry... always filled with so much emotion... the rymes in this poem were excellent, dont think whoever this poem is about deserves to have known as great of a person as yourself. keep writting ~Apryl

Re: You want it (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Sunday, 20th July 2003 @ 10:12:43 AM AEST
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beautiful poem...

Re: You want it (User Rating: 1 )
by SuicidalSon on Sunday, 3rd August 2003 @ 09:53:01 AM AEST
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I thank you for all of your replies I think you keep me writing and when I finish my book
I'll give you a special autographed copy Because I think you are my #1 fan thanks again for your support in my maddness

Re: You want it (User Rating: 1 )
by CuttersAngel on Tuesday, 23rd December 2003 @ 10:42:40 AM AEST
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I like this one. I think there is alot of meaning behind it that no one will really pick up on, but it's still good.

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