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Array ( [sid] => 20288 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Ouch!! [time] => 2003-07-12 09:35:00 [hometext] => Until further notice...I will be posting older poems..some as old as like 10 years or more .Im making YPDC my new home so I guess "all" of my writes should be here.Well..all wont be here as some felt it was time to cut the strings and stay behind ;) lol.To make this less time consuming,I will be posting near most all at once.So be sure to look at my site for all of them if you are interested *shrugs* :) Thanks to all my fellow poets here for your wonderful support and friendship..Loves yas xxx (((huggers))) [bodytext] => Tossed into sleeping backstreets,
Pieces fly in all directions
Tourists taking photos
Of my hearts latest dissection
Sliced straight down the centre,
Opened and explored
Edges peeled slightly,
As feelings oozed onto the floor
Unknowingly,I volunteered
For a scientific project
And ended up in pieces,
Another studied reject
How flattering it was to be
Your centre of attention
So shattering I didn't see
Your scalpel and it's intention [comments] => 4 [counter] => 172 [topic] => 48 [informant] => LovingWhispers [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Ouch!!

Contributed by LovingWhispers on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 09:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Tossed into sleeping backstreets,
Pieces fly in all directions
Tourists taking photos
Of my hearts latest dissection
Sliced straight down the centre,
Opened and explored
Edges peeled slightly,
As feelings oozed onto the floor
Unknowingly,I volunteered
For a scientific project
And ended up in pieces,
Another studied reject
How flattering it was to be
Your centre of attention
So shattering I didn't see
Your scalpel and it's intention




Copyright © LovingWhispers ... [ 2003-07-12 09:35:00]
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Re: Ouch!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 10:25:54 AM AEST
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definately been there
great poem
Shari


Re: Ouch!! (User Rating: 1 )
by wild_heart_of_fire on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 02:16:13 PM AEST
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ooooooooo...great great poem! i love it. i know how that feels..

Always,

~*riki lynn*~


Re: Ouch!! (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 03:30:06 PM AEST
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ouchies is right, love can bite, another wonderful write, filled with vivid detail:) hugs n' love nessa


Re: Ouch!! (User Rating: 1 )
by Crow on Saturday, 12th July 2003 @ 07:02:38 PM AEST
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i like the style very good write. Crow




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