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Array ( [sid] => 19992 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Endless rain [time] => 2003-07-05 20:05:00 [hometext] => When the next rainfall comes look out of the window . And who knows ? Maybe then someone will remember some words of mine ... [bodytext] =>

Endless rain
streaming down the window
the coolness of the glass
embraces my pain - extinguishes the thoughts
which burn me from inside

Endless rain
My fingers glide over the glossy surface
although able to see
still unable to touch
those quivering tears

Endless rain
wetting my face
- over and over –
wetting my clothes
dripping on the floor

Endless rain
An ocean of cries drowns my soul within me
Sometimes the ebb-tide may dry the ground
but then the flood-tide will always return
and Endless rain will be streaming down again.

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Endless rain

Contributed by whywhy on Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 08:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Endless rain
streaming down the window
the coolness of the glass
embraces my pain - extinguishes the thoughts
which burn me from inside

Endless rain
My fingers glide over the glossy surface
although able to see
still unable to touch
those quivering tears

Endless rain
wetting my face
- over and over –
wetting my clothes
dripping on the floor

Endless rain
An ocean of cries drowns my soul within me
Sometimes the ebb-tide may dry the ground
but then the flood-tide will always return
and Endless rain will be streaming down again.

Copyright Â© whywhy ... [ 2003-07-05 20:05:00]
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Re: Endless rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Saturday, 5th July 2003 @ 08:44:19 PM AEST
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well written

Shari

Re: Endless rain (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 07:03:57 AM AEST
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Well done..especially last stanza..very touching. venkat

Re: Endless rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 07:11:32 AM AEST
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Very evocative

Re: Endless rain (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Sunday, 6th July 2003 @ 02:58:24 PM AEST
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ah...beautiful...i will remember your words...

Re: Endless rain (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Monday, 7th July 2003 @ 06:12:10 AM AEST
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If only rain could revive the soul.
Beautifully written was an enlightening write.

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