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i'm glad that i have a heart make us never fall apart from the start i felt alive but you cut me like a knife your my love your my life can you see me suffering this trajedy i know it's hard to see i'm alone your picutre i see my pain won't let me be i can't breave one breath without you to the death my love for you is a fire of a thousand sun when i'm dong i see your tears feeling cold and having fears i see your image when i think with your face in a ring i coun't on you when i brake with the golden tears it's not fake i can taste them like the sea water and salt but you have the key so come to me and call my name in the stars this wish will come true i just need to be with you enough crawling and seeing your reflection on every look saying i'm hainsom i don't care i loved you like nobody dare we where left all alone i can't live my heart will turn to stone i really like to stop waiting for you all night your so right we can't win love without a fight you give me a sight to a new world where i can see all the memories stored i cruyed for you because i still love you i belive in you i can still feel that broken arrow in my sol the time it hit me it maked a holle with every motion i have to give for you don't turn your back run to me like lovers do it's very new when i'm close to you pretending i'm still holding you and some day after we both changed our fantasy love will bring you back to me every tear i feel in my tea it shakes like a quacke talking to me go back show her how you feel about this onesty at the end it got to me the perfect wish to live and care hugging with deep deep emotions and kissing hair with the frozen ring on our heads going deeper flipping and tossing in our beds can you feel it with me now going bigger saying how go back run away to a sad breaking day it will be heaven with us non stop cruying that what i loves kiss this pain away one day one night can happen only when i see your light it's ok to tell a lie ho's wight but it's depression to run away forgetting about me and our life it's waiting for us buy one meeting can you feel this heating like a fire on desert waiting every damn night and day come with me we will change reality i need you call me baby and to love me it fly away like a dream in a way it can never be seen. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 215 [topic] => 2 [informant] => wassim [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
have a heart

Contributed by wassim on Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 10:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



HAVE A HEART
i'm glad that i have a heart make us never fall apart from the start i felt alive but you cut me like a knife your my love your my life can you see me suffering this trajedy i know it's hard to see i'm alone your picutre i see my pain won't let me be i can't breave one breath without you to the death my love for you is a fire of a thousand sun when i'm dong i see your tears feeling cold and having fears i see your image when i think with your face in a ring i coun't on you when i brake with the golden tears it's not fake i can taste them like the sea water and salt but you have the key so come to me and call my name in the stars this wish will come true i just need to be with you enough crawling and seeing your reflection on every look saying i'm hainsom i don't care i loved you like nobody dare we where left all alone i can't live my heart will turn to stone i really like to stop waiting for you all night your so right we can't win love without a fight you give me a sight to a new world where i can see all the memories stored i cruyed for you because i still love you i belive in you i can still feel that broken arrow in my sol the time it hit me it maked a holle with every motion i have to give for you don't turn your back run to me like lovers do it's very new when i'm close to you pretending i'm still holding you and some day after we both changed our fantasy love will bring you back to me every tear i feel in my tea it shakes like a quacke talking to me go back show her how you feel about this onesty at the end it got to me the perfect wish to live and care hugging with deep deep emotions and kissing hair with the frozen ring on our heads going deeper flipping and tossing in our beds can you feel it with me now going bigger saying how go back run away to a sad breaking day it will be heaven with us non stop cruying that what i loves kiss this pain away one day one night can happen only when i see your light it's ok to tell a lie ho's wight but it's depression to run away forgetting about me and our life it's waiting for us buy one meeting can you feel this heating like a fire on desert waiting every damn night and day come with me we will change reality i need you call me baby and to love me it fly away like a dream in a way it can never be seen.




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Re: have a heart (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Wednesday, 18th June 2003 @ 03:16:15 PM AEST
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Have you ever met this lovely person?
Have you talked together?
Have you walked together?
What did she say?
Do you see her every day?

Your writing makes me want to know more. I hope you will tell us about life in your country and how these matters are resolved.


Re: have a heart (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 14th July 2003 @ 01:12:05 AM AEST
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I think I maight have liked this one had I have understood it all ...lol... It sems really beautiful and like you have a lot of talent, however, and maybe this isnt my place to say anything, (though this is for my personal comments) i was thinking that it may be easier to read if it had punctuation, I noticed that I had to read some lines over and over again trying to figure out where each "sentence" started and ended. i also had a problem getting through some of the spelling. Anyways this would be truly wonderful if there were some sort of break after each line... its like reading a 500 word sentence, I almost felt as if i had to rush through it!!!

Still, good write hun, look forward to reading more of yours...




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