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Array ( [sid] => 18903 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Apparent Now! [time] => 2003-06-11 16:45:00 [hometext] => This is about how everything always can change and invariably does, even the Leopards spots!

Stories of the little lady at the end intrigue me greatly, as I think I glimpsed an adult of her kind a few years ago, could she be real? I think so, maybe! [bodytext] => Approaching the garden with the gates of destiny before us,
The feeling stirred within that we'd treaded this path at least two and twenty times before.

But all was ok,
As at last we were home.

Peering out from the kitchen window
I could see changes were again afoot,
Another new family were moving in next door.

The loving couple introduced themselves as they huddled on our porch
'Hi we're Peace and Tranquillity',
'And this is our new-born' they said with joyous eyes,
She's named for the sake of her auntie,
Little Pontianak'. [comments] => 5 [counter] => 322 [topic] => 31 [informant] => Unaekseveer1 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => StoryPoetry )

Apparent Now!

Contributed by Unaekseveer1 on Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 04:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: StoryPoetry

Approaching the garden with the gates of destiny before us,
The feeling stirred within that we'd treaded this path at least two and twenty times before.

But all was ok,
As at last we were home.

Peering out from the kitchen window
I could see changes were again afoot,
Another new family were moving in next door.

The loving couple introduced themselves as they huddled on our porch
'Hi we're Peace and Tranquillity',
'And this is our new-born' they said with joyous eyes,
She's named for the sake of her auntie,
Little Pontianak'.

Copyright © Unaekseveer1 ... [ 2003-06-11 16:45:00]
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Re: Apparent Now! (User Rating: 1 )
by Rose on Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 07:33:14 PM AEST
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yes DEan, events in lives do change, even those leopard spots. :) I liked this write. But I'm not up on the name in your last sentence, call it over my head, but can you tell me what it means? I know you always write in ways of the hidden meanings, as I do too. And I enjoyed the write, for how we all wish to have that peace and tranquility. Changes do happen as long as the person wants to do so, not someone doing it for them.
nice write. hope all is well.
Amber Rose :)

Re: Apparent Now! (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 11:23:12 PM AEST
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very good write, but I am also unsure about the meaning of the name.
Shari

Re: Apparent Now! (User Rating: 1 )
by ShadowsCloud on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 11:24:27 PM AEST
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Dean,
Yet another great poem. The way I see it change can be a good thing. Without change I think that life would get predictable and boring.

ShadowsCloud

Re: Apparent Now! (User Rating: 1 )
by yellow_sundragon on Sunday, 13th July 2003 @ 05:47:33 AM AEST
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Dean,

Great write. We all do need change, and I think that once life is the same for too long, we, as humans, crave it. I loved this poem, but I'm unsure what the last name means.

*J*

Re: Apparent Now! (User Rating: 1 )
by mckayla on Tuesday, 4th November 2003 @ 11:19:42 AM AEST
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me too!! ienjoyed the poem. yes what does that name mean????????

mckayla

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