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Grey clouds were cast from horizon to the sea,
Upsetting and clashing even the light.
Peace was prayed and cried for,
He sacrificed the skin and bone for a moment’s rest,
But peace never came.

No matter where he went, t’was never there.
In its place was the buzzing of distance
And a great murmur of those who care not
For any wonder of this Earth.

As he ran through crowded, cold woods,
He raced closer and closer to an edge,
Rocky and unstable, tumbling high above a deep abyss.

While blindly looking for his tranquility,
He came across the tallest mountain.
Even today he does not know how or why
He reached that very summit.

For the first time in his life, he breathed
And heard the rushing of his blood.
All around the mountain, the air echoed in a rapturous silence,
Singing without any need for a single note or chord.
As his heart lay beating and his eyes weeping,
Peace befell and cleared his aching soul.

With such miraculous understanding,
He returned to the buzzing and murmuring,
With his pieces mended and mind cleared of the winter,
He lives among everyone, but is never truly there.

When he walked safely down the mountain,
And slowly drifted away from the edge,
He took the peace and silence with him,
Forever his to grasp.
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The Mountain

Contributed by angrybunny on Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 04:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: NaturePoetry



During the dark days of his winter,
Grey clouds were cast from horizon to the sea,
Upsetting and clashing even the light.
Peace was prayed and cried for,
He sacrificed the skin and bone for a moment’s rest,
But peace never came.

No matter where he went, t’was never there.
In its place was the buzzing of distance
And a great murmur of those who care not
For any wonder of this Earth.

As he ran through crowded, cold woods,
He raced closer and closer to an edge,
Rocky and unstable, tumbling high above a deep abyss.

While blindly looking for his tranquility,
He came across the tallest mountain.
Even today he does not know how or why
He reached that very summit.

For the first time in his life, he breathed
And heard the rushing of his blood.
All around the mountain, the air echoed in a rapturous silence,
Singing without any need for a single note or chord.
As his heart lay beating and his eyes weeping,
Peace befell and cleared his aching soul.

With such miraculous understanding,
He returned to the buzzing and murmuring,
With his pieces mended and mind cleared of the winter,
He lives among everyone, but is never truly there.

When he walked safely down the mountain,
And slowly drifted away from the edge,
He took the peace and silence with him,
Forever his to grasp.




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Re: The Mountain (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 04:58:45 PM AEST
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this is an magnificent poem! what talent you have!!!


Re: The Mountain (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 05:00:19 PM AEST
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very beautiful, wonderful write, for me it being near the water
Shari


Re: The Mountain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 05:10:34 PM AEST
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very interesting perspective. I relate!
Nicely done!!!
godspeed......joni


Re: The Mountain (User Rating: 1 )
by roisin on Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 05:34:58 PM AEST
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your words hold the wonder and magic of it all...yes indeed !!! I can relate...thank you for sharing
rosie


Re: The Mountain (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 06:58:20 PM AEST
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Very nicely done!!
Jenni


Re: The Mountain (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 09:20:20 PM AEST
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Beautiful work, excellently written piece. Shows immense talent and skill!


Re: The Mountain (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 10:29:31 AM AEST
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A lovely poem. yes I can relate and I would spend may times in the mountains or at the river thinking and overcoming things. Wel done.
Michelle


Re: The Mountain (User Rating: 1 )
by Rakerman1999 on Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 12:45:14 PM AEST
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Outstanding!!! This is a true work of art.

Larry


Re: The Mountain (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 03:29:32 PM AEST
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this is a most beautiful excellent write, is 'he' a little animal, maybe a fox? i love this so much:) hugs n' love nessa


Re: The Mountain (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 09:20:25 AM AEST
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I have made thay journey. But,as you say, it's hard to share it with others in ones normal surroundings.

But here, on YPDC, I feel the sharing with so many.

I wrote a poem about it months back. I think it was called "Is this what heaven's like" I'll have to check.


Re: The Mountain (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Wednesday, 16th July 2003 @ 09:25:43 AM AEST
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Yes Ive checked the name, written Jan 18th.




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