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Array ( [sid] => 18854 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I Long... [time] => 2003-06-10 08:45:00 [hometext] => I wrote this for someone I was very much in love with....at least until the truth came out. See the sequel to this poem! [bodytext] => I long to get off that plane,
and see your beautiful face,
to finally experience your touch,
and feel your warm embrace!

How I long to kiss your lips,
to feel their touch on mine,
to finally have you to hold,
oh, how my world would shine!

How I long to share each day,
wrapped tightly in your love,
to fianlly be with you,
our hearts free as a dove!

How I long to share with you,
the things that I hold dear,
to finally whisper, "I Love You, Angel",
in your sleeping ear!

How I long to share,
your hopes, dreams, and fears,
to finally be there with you,
and wipe away your tears!

How I long to make,
your everyday full of love and life,
to finally help you through,
each struggle or any strife!

But most of all, I long for the day,
when you say, "I Do",
to finally know in my heart,
I'LL ALWAYS BE WITH YOU!!
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I Long...

Contributed by Goebelclm73 on Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 08:45:00 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy

I long to get off that plane,
and see your beautiful face,
to finally experience your touch,
and feel your warm embrace!

How I long to kiss your lips,
to feel their touch on mine,
to finally have you to hold,
oh, how my world would shine!

How I long to share each day,
wrapped tightly in your love,
to fianlly be with you,
our hearts free as a dove!

How I long to share with you,
the things that I hold dear,
to finally whisper, "I Love You, Angel",
in your sleeping ear!

How I long to share,
your hopes, dreams, and fears,
to finally be there with you,
and wipe away your tears!

How I long to make,
your everyday full of love and life,
to finally help you through,
each struggle or any strife!

But most of all, I long for the day,
when you say, "I Do",
to finally know in my heart,
I'LL ALWAYS BE WITH YOU!!

Copyright © Goebelclm73 ... [ 2003-06-10 08:45:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I Long... (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 10:18:31 AM AEST
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great poem!
Too bad things didn't turn out too good.
Keep writing, you've got a talent1
always
Crazy

Re: I Long... (User Rating: 1 )
by Goebelclm73 on Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 03:15:06 PM AEST
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Crazy,
No, actually it turned out for the best things didn't work out with Mel and I...what's unfortunate is that I let it happen again...only this time I got married. Divorce is much harder than a break up. I'll try to continue writing, I've been struggling for a couple of years now...time will tell. Thank you for your comment(s)..you seem to be my biggest fan.
Honestly/Faithless,
Christopher

Re: I Long... (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 04:11:40 PM AEST
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Yeh, sorry it didnt work out, but everything ends eventually, which includes your search for love, and you wont be empty handed!

Your Friend
- Becca

Re: I Long... (User Rating: 1 )
by Goebelclm73 on Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 04:52:09 PM AEST
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Aww, Becca hun, don't be sorry, I'm not, at least not any more. It happened for a reason, only time will tell me why. And until then I have to deal with the present, which is much like the past all over again. Thank you for your comment!!!
Christopher

Re: I Long... (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 05:27:39 PM AEST
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this was lovely, unfortunately i read the other poem first, she definately does not deserve you

Shari

Re: I Long... (User Rating: 1 )
by Goebelclm73 on Wednesday, 11th June 2003 @ 07:22:44 AM AEST
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Shari,
Thank you for the comment!! You're right too...Melanie did NOT deserve someone like me, it's unfortunate however that it took me as long as it did to realize it. But that was a long time ago...What sucks is, I'm going through it all again.
Thanks again!
Christopher

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