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Array ( [sid] => 18816 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => I still want to tell you this... [time] => 2003-06-09 08:05:00 [hometext] => another ***** poem about a boy...please leave comments...mean/nasty/nice...i dont care. [bodytext] => I stare at myself through tearful eyes,
But I don’t want to look anymore.
All that I’ve become is centered on your lies.
I can’t go on like this anymore.

I misplaced my heart in your hands.
Won’t you please give it back?
Give it back while I still have strength to stand.
I’ve lost all I have in you.

Time skips by,
Greedily taking what moments of happiness I once had.
Plug your ears and pretend you don’t hear me cry.
I’m trying to steal back my sanity.

My wrists are so tired of the knife’s cold blade.
My eyes are unhappy, they cry for you.
My head is done making sense of this mess we’ve made.
My mind is lost in thoughts of you.

I still want to tell you all my secrets.
I want to tell you all my lies.
I can’t live with anymore regrets.
But I’ll miss you.

I want nothing more then for you to let me go.
Don’t hate me.
There are still things about me you will never know.
But, don’t regret this.

We were a mistake.
But no one can erase time.
Learn to give and take,
Maybe the next relationship won’t be so hard.

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I still want to tell you this...

Contributed by MX on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 08:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

I stare at myself through tearful eyes,
But I don’t want to look anymore.
All that I’ve become is centered on your lies.
I can’t go on like this anymore.

I misplaced my heart in your hands.
Won’t you please give it back?
Give it back while I still have strength to stand.
I’ve lost all I have in you.

Time skips by,
Greedily taking what moments of happiness I once had.
Plug your ears and pretend you don’t hear me cry.
I’m trying to steal back my sanity.

My wrists are so tired of the knife’s cold blade.
My eyes are unhappy, they cry for you.
My head is done making sense of this mess we’ve made.
My mind is lost in thoughts of you.

I still want to tell you all my secrets.
I want to tell you all my lies.
I can’t live with anymore regrets.
But I’ll miss you.

I want nothing more then for you to let me go.
Don’t hate me.
There are still things about me you will never know.
But, don’t regret this.

We were a mistake.
But no one can erase time.
Learn to give and take,
Maybe the next relationship won’t be so hard.

Copyright Â© MX ... [ 2003-06-09 08:05:00]
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Re: I still want to tell you this... (User Rating: 1 )
by XoIrishXo on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 11:10:42 AM AEST
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I can feel the hurt thru your words...and I am sorry!! Great poem!! Writing always makes me feel better..it is my release...so KEEP WRITING Good Luck! XoXo

Re: I still want to tell you this... (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 02:56:13 PM AEST
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6/9/03

I feel your pain, but you are strong. You can do so much better. I hope u have a friend to help u get through this. I wish you the best and may this guy realize what an idiot he is!
Take care,
crazy

Re: I still want to tell you this... (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 04:11:05 PM AEST
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Put your friend up on the shelf
Think only this time of your self,
Take a look at who's coming,
On the sidewalk, he's humming
He's real and he's not just an elf

Re: I still want to tell you this... (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Tuesday, 10th June 2003 @ 01:48:18 PM AEST
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Take it from someone whose been through it many times. Read my poem "He's not the only one"

You are already on your way and looking ahead. Excellent poem. Good luck.

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