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Array ( [sid] => 18784 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Depression [time] => 2003-06-08 14:05:00 [hometext] => My friend ignores me. That's pretty much all I need to say about this poem. I have a whole bunch like this. You'd think she'd notice by now, how completely ignored I feel. [bodytext] => Talk to me and bring me back
To the way we used to be
Back to the times when you cared
Whether I lived or died the next day
Back to the days when we were friends
And there weren't many people
That needed all of your attention
Now even strangers are better to be with
Than little old me, I'm used up
My laughter is sparce and fake
My smiles are tight, and my jokes aren't funny
Most of them are at my own expense
And the sad thing is, that you agree with them
You know I don't mind being second best
Actually, I hate it entirely
But being any best
Is better than the way you treat me
It's all much better
Than being ignored [comments] => 3 [counter] => 315 [topic] => 13 [informant] => DepressingKitsune [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 1 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Depression

Contributed by DepressingKitsune on Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 02:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

Talk to me and bring me back
To the way we used to be
Back to the times when you cared
Whether I lived or died the next day
Back to the days when we were friends
And there weren't many people
That needed all of your attention
Now even strangers are better to be with
Than little old me, I'm used up
My laughter is sparce and fake
My smiles are tight, and my jokes aren't funny
Most of them are at my own expense
And the sad thing is, that you agree with them
You know I don't mind being second best
Actually, I hate it entirely
But being any best
Is better than the way you treat me
It's all much better
Than being ignored

Copyright © DepressingKitsune ... [ 2003-06-08 14:05:00]
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Re: Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by deadly_blaZe on Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 03:32:30 PM AEST
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ive felt like this a bunch of times before i just havent gotten around to writing about it.. nice work
XxEricaxX

Re: Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 12:26:24 AM AEST
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Don't know what to say about this I liked it a lot maybe your friend doesn't realize how u feel. Tell her. I told some of my friends I thought we were growing apart they had no idea and now we're closer next time u see her tell her how u feel. Best of luck...

Bobo (Joel)

Re: Depression (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 9th June 2003 @ 09:28:55 AM AEST
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I have felt like this aswell. Great work. You expressed yourself very well. Maybe you should show your friend this poem.

sleepless_siren

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