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So these tears wouldn't fall
Wish that I could rekindle my heart's desire
That I could renew that passionate fire

Pain is streaming from my heart
Feeling so dead, callous, numb, broken
Giving up, my insides are churning
For some peace and hope I'm striving and yearning,

But my dead eyes stare out of empty sockets
And you stumble away, as I lick greedily at the dust
Smiling at the pain maybe its something I crave
It owns me in any case... I'm a slave

Groping down a dark hallway
Wondering where dreams come from
Singing my sad song that only I know
That I wrote, to help, in my hours of woe

I'm screaming like a wounded dragon
Impaled upon my fear
I'm crying holding my heart which is bleeding
Sanctity and serenity I'm dreadfully needing

Pain is streaming from my arm
I'm crying, shaking, trying to deny that I'm bleeding
Trying to piece together the remains
Hoping, praying I'll be swept away by the spring rains [comments] => 8 [counter] => 224 [topic] => 32 [informant] => bobotheclown [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 8 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

Pain is Streaming

Contributed by bobotheclown on Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 02:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

Wish my heart couldn't feel pain
So these tears wouldn't fall
Wish that I could rekindle my heart's desire
That I could renew that passionate fire

Pain is streaming from my heart
Feeling so dead, callous, numb, broken
Giving up, my insides are churning
For some peace and hope I'm striving and yearning,

But my dead eyes stare out of empty sockets
And you stumble away, as I lick greedily at the dust
Smiling at the pain maybe its something I crave
It owns me in any case... I'm a slave

Groping down a dark hallway
Wondering where dreams come from
Singing my sad song that only I know
That I wrote, to help, in my hours of woe

I'm screaming like a wounded dragon
Impaled upon my fear
I'm crying holding my heart which is bleeding
Sanctity and serenity I'm dreadfully needing

Pain is streaming from my arm
I'm crying, shaking, trying to deny that I'm bleeding
Trying to piece together the remains
Hoping, praying I'll be swept away by the spring rains

Copyright © bobotheclown ... [ 2003-06-08 02:35:00]
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Re: Pain is Streaming (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 02:51:38 AM AEST
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Really good write, Joel.... Hope all is well with you.... Miss our chats...
Hugs
Jenni

Re: Pain is Streaming (User Rating: 1 )
by afraid_of_fear on Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 12:11:09 PM AEST
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Such a powerful poem! It's really good, and like you say, it flows really well.
I liked these lines the best i think:
But my dead eyes stare out of empty sockets
And you stumble away, as I lick greedily at the dust
charlotte x_x_x

Re: Pain is Streaming (User Rating: 1 )
by deadly_blaZe on Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 12:25:59 PM AEST
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Of coarse I love this poem too Joel! I agree with charlotte... Those were my favorite lines also.

Re: Pain is Streaming (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 06:44:50 PM AEST
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Beautiful,heartfelt emotion poured into this poem. Loved it alot!!!
Angel always...Godspeed...joni

Re: Pain is Streaming (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Sunday, 8th June 2003 @ 09:48:52 PM AEST
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A touching write here Joel. Hope everything is ok.
Michelle

Re: Pain is Streaming (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 06:03:13 PM AEST
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joel...this is beautiful...i miss you so much...please can you e-mail me? i hope i haven't upset you...i'm sorry...

Re: Pain is Streaming (User Rating: 1 )
by bopeep on Tuesday, 17th June 2003 @ 06:05:47 PM AEST
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i loved this one. Pain is streaming from my arm
I'm crying, shaking, trying to deny that I'm bleeding
Trying to piece together the remains
Hoping, praying I'll be swept away by the spring rains.... wicked. Hey, now that your comp is working again, we can chat? You sound like you need a hug... lol. ::hug:: (i've had waay too much sugar...lol) '.)

Re: Pain is Streaming (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 19th June 2003 @ 10:27:00 AM AEST
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I love your poetry so much and I can relate to it so much. I hope everything is ok with you. You are right this poem does flow great. It is a very good write.
Stace

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