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Array ( [sid] => 18617 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Right There [time] => 2003-06-05 12:05:00 [hometext] => This is a poem i wrote for school, for Romeo and Juliet. It's after Romeo has been exiled from the city, if u know anything about Romeo and Juliet [bodytext] => When the cold becomes
Too much to bear
Even though he cannot see me
I will be standing right there
When the road becomes too long
And he’s lost in despair
Please let him realize
I am standing right there
And at night when he crawls into bed
All alone, thinking it’s not fair
Let him turn, and see my face
For I’ll be laying right there
When he walks among the people
Pretending to not have a care
Let his racing mind and pounding heart know
Holding his hand, I am right there.

And when no light can shine through
Into this imprisoning lair
When these walls act as my prison
Please let him be right there
When my secrets become too much
And I have no one with whom to share
Please let him be listening
Let him be standing right there
And with my heart so torn now
Every day a little more it shall tear
When I feel the pain my heart feels
Let him be standing right there.
And when I lose all my hope
And don’t think anyone can hear my prayers
Please let me have the comfort
Of knowing he’s always there
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 48 [informant] => BlackFire9786 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
Right There

Contributed by BlackFire9786 on Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 12:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



When the cold becomes
Too much to bear
Even though he cannot see me
I will be standing right there
When the road becomes too long
And he’s lost in despair
Please let him realize
I am standing right there
And at night when he crawls into bed
All alone, thinking it’s not fair
Let him turn, and see my face
For I’ll be laying right there
When he walks among the people
Pretending to not have a care
Let his racing mind and pounding heart know
Holding his hand, I am right there.

And when no light can shine through
Into this imprisoning lair
When these walls act as my prison
Please let him be right there
When my secrets become too much
And I have no one with whom to share
Please let him be listening
Let him be standing right there
And with my heart so torn now
Every day a little more it shall tear
When I feel the pain my heart feels
Let him be standing right there.
And when I lose all my hope
And don’t think anyone can hear my prayers
Please let me have the comfort
Of knowing he’s always there




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Re: Right There (User Rating: 1 )
by wild_heart_of_fire on Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 03:38:29 PM AEST
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Awwwwwww!!!! you wrote a mushy love poem!!!! i'm so proud of you!!! it's really good 2...i knew you could do it! great write lis...(i know deep down that your romantic) haha...love ya bunches.
Your twin,
Riki


Re: Right There (User Rating: 1 )
by BlackFire9786 on Thursday, 5th June 2003 @ 05:54:20 PM AEST
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Riki......I luv ya......but DONT push it! haha
Luv ya lotz-Lisa


Re: Right There (User Rating: 1 )
by Trisha on Friday, 6th June 2003 @ 12:17:18 AM AEST
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hey Lisa,
this is a good poem and i think you shouldnt give up...i hope we become good friends...
Mandy




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