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[sid] => 185472
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[aid] => mick
[title] => Is it Reality
[time] => 2018-09-28 09:01:35
[hometext] =>
[bodytext] => Does it slide slowly
silently
Under your skin
does it pass
though the cracks
of what you think
Does it grab
your Mind
by the neck
silently
whispering
this is not
what you think
it is
[comments] => 2
[counter] => 106
[topic] => 21
[informant] => drone
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[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
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[associated] =>
[topicname] => Lifepoems
)
Is it Reality
Contributed by
drone
on
Friday, 28th September 2018 @ 09:01:35 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Does it slide slowly
silently
Under your skin
does it pass
though the cracks
of what you think
Does it grab
your Mind
by the neck
silently
whispering
this is not
what you think
it is
Copyright ©
drone
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2018-09-28 09:01:35] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Is it Reality
(User Rating: 1 ) by purplestary on
Friday, 28th September 2018 @ 08:02:43 PM AEST (User
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If it does not leave you questioning everything, if it does not rip you from the confinement of your comfort zone and "grab your mind", then do you really even want it? Is it really even for you? awesome words here. thank you so much for sharing them with us all. |
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Re: Is it Reality
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Sunday, 30th September 2018 @ 04:50:46 PM AEST (User
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YIKES. This gives me goosebumps it is such an accurate description of that haunting knowing that comes over us! Unique and disturbing expressions you have chosen drive the message home and you abandon us to think it over!
GRAB YOUR MIND BY THE NECK...Been there!
And thanks to you..probably going back!
This is really excellent.
softerware |
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