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[sid] => 185455
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => The fool
[time] => 2018-09-21 12:28:19
[hometext] => I feel like I should take some responsibility for letting people hurt me. After all I did allow them into my life.
[bodytext] => It was my fault,
I was the fool,
I let you treat me that way,
I allowed you to be cruel.
I lost myself,
Misplaced who I was,
Gave up my self respect,
I put my life on pause.
Don/'/t blame yourself,
It/'/s all on me,
Yes, you took advantage,
But I should have seen.
Do not come back,
I/'/m strong again,
I found who I am now,
I won/'/t feel more pain.
It was my fault,
I let you in,
I gave you too much,
I let you under my skin.
[comments] => 3
[counter] => 238
[topic] => 65
[informant] => Frecks
[notes] =>
[ihome] => 0
[alanguage] => english
[acomm] => 0
[haspoll] => 0
[pollID] => 0
[score] => 0
[ratings] => 0
[editpoem] => 1
[associated] =>
[topicname] => toughstuff
)
The fool
Contributed by
Frecks
on
Friday, 21st September 2018 @ 12:28:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
toughstuff
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It was my fault,
I was the fool,
I let you treat me that way,
I allowed you to be cruel.
I lost myself,
Misplaced who I was,
Gave up my self respect,
I put my life on pause.
Don/'/t blame yourself,
It/'/s all on me,
Yes, you took advantage,
But I should have seen.
Do not come back,
I/'/m strong again,
I found who I am now,
I won/'/t feel more pain.
It was my fault,
I let you in,
I gave you too much,
I let you under my skin.
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Frecks
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2018-09-21 12:28:19] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: The fool
(User Rating: 1 ) by softerware on
Friday, 21st September 2018 @ 05:46:58 PM AEST (User
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I doubt after reading this that the author is a fool.
There is good evidence that we can learn when we take responsibility, and that is the message I take from your poem.
Nice rhythm, and very compact, making the poem rich and nourishing to the spirit. Im sure you will enjoy many readers.
Your turn to read and comment on someone elses writing! We all read as well as write, and look forward to your comments.
softerware
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Re: The fool
(User Rating: 1 ) by hauntedscorp on
Saturday, 22nd September 2018 @ 04:20:10 PM AEST (User
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Yes. It can feel foolish to try our hand at love and quote unquote lose... The real fool is anyone who pretends to be serious when they are not...Fall seven times, stand up eight.
Stay true to yourself.
P.s is your name Carol? Nickname Freckles before? Just curious... If so, welcome back.
Welcome, either way! Keep writing.
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Re: The fool
(User Rating: 1 ) by unknown_utopia on
Thursday, 27th September 2018 @ 05:11:20 AM AEST (User
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Its all good
you not the only one to feel that way
but
remember-you got to be in it to win it |
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