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but my heart isn/'/t in it.
I try to sing, I try to dance
but my heart isn/'/t in it.

I once had a muse ...
we don/'/t communicate any more.
My muse started speaking another language
or something ... it/'/s hard to say.
We no longer communicate.

It seems my language changed too.
I seem to speak only ellipsis these days ... [comments] => 7 [counter] => 127 [topic] => 43 [informant] => MaryZayas [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Writing Ellipsis

Contributed by MaryZayas on Monday, 6th August 2018 @ 07:52:52 AM in AEST
Topic: oops

I came here intending to write
but my heart isn/'/t in it.
I try to sing, I try to dance
but my heart isn/'/t in it.

I once had a muse ...
we don/'/t communicate any more.
My muse started speaking another language
or something ... it/'/s hard to say.
We no longer communicate.

It seems my language changed too.
I seem to speak only ellipsis these days ...

Copyright © MaryZayas ... [ 2018-08-06 07:52:52]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Writing Ellipsis (User Rating: 1 )
by Deidra_Carmichael on Tuesday, 7th August 2018 @ 02:38:36 AM AEST
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Wow, clear enough to get the point, yet mysterious at the same time. Great work and blessings,

Deidra

Re: Writing Ellipsis (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 7th August 2018 @ 04:36:02 AM AEST
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////Well, if I/'/m getting this right, it/'/s a very unique writer/'/s block poem. Very nice.

Thank you.

Welcome to YPDC.

Tim
// //

Re: Writing Ellipsis (User Rating: 1 )
by redwest802 on Saturday, 11th August 2018 @ 04:04:35 AM AEST
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iNTERESTING, I LIKE IT

Re: Writing Ellipsis (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 12th August 2018 @ 10:21:57 AM AEST
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I would say that life is just like
this, but then, I would be lost
for words trying to define the
best way to say it.

But I would try, by using a muse,
but my muse was always disguised
And sometimes it would seem as
though I had no muse, and I
could not be my own muse,
No matter how hard I might

Try.

Peace!

Re: Writing Ellipsis (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Thursday, 16th August 2018 @ 04:15:37 PM AEST
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I find it ironic that when writers feel that they can/'/t write -- they write about it!
The passion to be heard supersedes our awkward mechanical failings. We write to exist.
You have penned an accurate description of writers block!
softerware

Re: Writing Ellipsis (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 1st September 2018 @ 12:16:55 AM AEST
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For me, life just gets in the way of writing sometimes.
Sadly, without life we wouldn/'/t have anything to write about in the first place
Striking a balance is the key!!

Steve

Re: Writing Ellipsis (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 3rd September 2020 @ 05:11:03 PM AEST
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I came here intending to write
but my heart isn//'//t in it.
I try to sing, I try to dance
but my heart isn//'//t in it.

Its called depression......... I/'/m getting there myself.
You figure why even bother... God Bless

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