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I struggle to brace the dam
holding back the acid lake
churning in my gut,
threatening to spill over
into my mouth.
A night of pure torment
and misery,
unable to rest my head
for more than a few seconds
at a time.

Hell hath no fury
like acid reflux! [comments] => 4 [counter] => 149 [topic] => 43 [informant] => nightwolf [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Furious Stomach

Contributed by nightwolf on Tuesday, 6th March 2018 @ 05:11:41 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Eyes watering;
I struggle to brace the dam
holding back the acid lake
churning in my gut,
threatening to spill over
into my mouth.
A night of pure torment
and misery,
unable to rest my head
for more than a few seconds
at a time.

Hell hath no fury
like acid reflux!

Copyright © nightwolf ... [ 2018-03-06 17:11:41]
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Re: Furious Stomach (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Wednesday, 7th March 2018 @ 08:01:51 AM AEST
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This cracked me up! I can relate for sure. That is why adjustable beds are so popular!
There/'/ a huge market share for products like Prilosec, and the over 60s generation is the target audience.
If this write is any indicator of the work you do when I can/'/t sleep --- I wish you insomnia!
Well done. Bravo.
softerware

Re: Furious Stomach (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Friday, 9th March 2018 @ 04:39:11 AM AEST
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Ouch! A wonderfully painful write!!!

Re: Furious Stomach (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Friday, 9th March 2018 @ 07:42:16 PM AEST
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I wonder what the statistics are on ulcers and the like with writers...Probably off the charts! Somehow still preferable to writers block...Oh, woe is me and my furious stomach! ;)

~Scorp

Re: Furious Stomach (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Saturday, 10th March 2018 @ 01:58:47 AM AEST
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Sorry for your pain..........truly I feel it as I sometimes get the same!!
I always liken my body to a badly built car with some of the stupid things it does.
Great write

Steve

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