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where two are not aloud
watching the illusions

International oligarths
war on the world is on
its hunting souls season

trump became potus
now old emotions are noticed
seems everything west is burning in the confusion

joel osteen
will get you to heaven
soon as his mansion gets cleaning

Is my mind playing
tricks on me
or is that another mass shooting,
diversity no longer feels like a win
in the middle east they are rioting
and
dumbocrates and the repulsicans
keep the citzens divided
while another terrorist leaves the innocent bleeding,
gimme the remote control
I wanna change the channel
but this is really happening

The perversion world
that use to be
has come into focus

black and white good ol boys
are being kicked out
but their victims still feel hopeless

Fake news is giving me the blues
I wonder
does it really matter
who mueller is after

although kicking sludge is what I do
theres so much of it
that my minds blown and shattered [comments] => 4 [counter] => 92 [topic] => 43 [informant] => unknown_utopia [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Gimme The Remote Control

Contributed by unknown_utopia on Monday, 11th December 2017 @ 01:23:58 PM in AEST
Topic: oops



I was up in a cloud
where two are not aloud
watching the illusions

International oligarths
war on the world is on
its hunting souls season

trump became potus
now old emotions are noticed
seems everything west is burning in the confusion

joel osteen
will get you to heaven
soon as his mansion gets cleaning

Is my mind playing
tricks on me
or is that another mass shooting,
diversity no longer feels like a win
in the middle east they are rioting
and
dumbocrates and the repulsicans
keep the citzens divided
while another terrorist leaves the innocent bleeding,
gimme the remote control
I wanna change the channel
but this is really happening

The perversion world
that use to be
has come into focus

black and white good ol boys
are being kicked out
but their victims still feel hopeless

Fake news is giving me the blues
I wonder
does it really matter
who mueller is after

although kicking sludge is what I do
theres so much of it
that my minds blown and shattered




Copyright © unknown_utopia ... [ 2017-12-11 13:23:58]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Gimme The Remote Control (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 12th December 2017 @ 04:24:54 AM AEST
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Did you just read my mind? Seriously!!!!!
Awesome write my friend..... Awesome!!!!!
I/'/m sick of it all too!!!!!


Re: Gimme The Remote Control (User Rating: 1 )
by deusdeira on Tuesday, 12th December 2017 @ 09:35:19 PM AEST
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When a presidential election increases the rise in hate crimes, you know that your political system is corrupt. When people who live side by side turn on each other and even shoot the innocent, you can tell that your society is failing in many ways. Mass shootings increase and fear rises. This is what the people in power want. A people divided are a people more easily conquered. The mindset that people are dumb sheep to be led to the slaughter has become more prevalent each passing day. Many people enjoy the company of animals more than the company of other human beings. This is how detached we have become from one another in our society. Trust has mysteriously been vanishing since the 1980s. Why is this? One can only speculate.


Re: Gimme The Remote Control (User Rating: 1 )
by nightwolf on Wednesday, 13th December 2017 @ 11:21:52 AM AEST
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Fantastic write!! It/'/s hard to make sense of the chaos in the world when you got 2 sides telling us their own version of the truth. I enjoyed this


Re: Gimme The Remote Control (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 2nd October 2020 @ 09:50:10 AM AEST
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🇺🇸 Trump 2020 🇺🇸




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