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Rain beats steady on my panes
to flash of lightening
yet again,
and your life like thunder
rumbled through;
for all my love
you are a storm
that blew,
unrelenting,
trouble bound,
always running from
your own hell hounds,
and on that day
they caught
your hem
and held;
such mighty promise,
stillborn, felled.
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Fallen Sister

Contributed by invierno on Saturday, 29th April 2017 @ 05:41:15 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

Rain beats steady on my panes
to flash of lightening
yet again,
and your life like thunder
rumbled through;
for all my love
you are a storm
that blew,
unrelenting,
trouble bound,
always running from
your own hell hounds,
and on that day
they caught
your hem
and held;
such mighty promise,
stillborn, felled.

Copyright © invierno ... [ 2017-04-29 05:41:15]
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Re: Fallen Sister (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 29th April 2017 @ 10:10:25 AM AEST
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Sad. :(

Re: Fallen Sister (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 30th April 2017 @ 12:42:21 AM AEST
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sad indeed...

Re: Fallen Sister (User Rating: 1 )
by xHeathenx on Monday, 1st May 2017 @ 03:07:03 PM AEST
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Beautiful touch of what may have been and the cold of the natural. I see your mind/'/s not resting, and I/'/m glad your writing is unrelenting ;)

Re: Fallen Sister (User Rating: 1 )
by irisblue on Monday, 1st May 2017 @ 08:15:41 PM AEST
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Michael,
this is beautiful but sad. I felt deeply the sorrow in this write.

Irisblue

Re: Fallen Sister (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Tuesday, 2nd May 2017 @ 07:03:36 PM AEST
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THIS MAKES READERS WONDER HOW WE OURSLEVES WILL BE REMEMBERED.
We cannot write of who we are; only others can do that for us. We cannot be the mirror.
This is a tribute, and an apology for not bringing purpose into the life of a storm.
There are people we watch like the constellations, in awe of them, yet unable to touch them. So well you conclude, /'/such mighty promise, stillborn, felled./'/ A fitting goodbye for one who departed still in bud, unbloomed.
softerware

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