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for myself
finds me chilly here,
heated there,
wrong,
strong,
right,
long gone….
ever changing, seeking better,
humility has found me
willing,
fulfilling,
accepting,
rejecting my same old song,
at last finding a better way to move along
this ever changing path. [comments] => 4 [counter] => 228 [topic] => 19 [informant] => invierno [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )

A Dip Inside Myself

Contributed by invierno on Saturday, 10th December 2016 @ 08:44:17 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

A dip inside myself by myself
for myself
finds me chilly here,
heated there,
wrong,
strong,
right,
long gone….
ever changing, seeking better,
humility has found me
willing,
fulfilling,
accepting,
rejecting my same old song,
at last finding a better way to move along
this ever changing path.

Copyright Â© invierno ... [ 2016-12-10 20:44:17]
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Re: A Dip Inside Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Sunday, 11th December 2016 @ 08:59:55 AM AEST
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Great poem Mike.
You can/'/t expand your horizons by seeing everything as black and white and your way may not always be the right way. You have to open up and realize that what we may think we know or were taught may not be the right way.

Plus it/'/s just easier to go through life with an open mind. Great write.

James

Re: A Dip Inside Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Tuesday, 13th December 2016 @ 04:32:15 PM AEST
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I find it ironic that this inspiring delight of growth and metamorphosis speaks to the emotions of the person throughout, yet in the very last line it credits the EVER CHANGING PATH.
I suspect it is not the path that is changing, Michael, but the clever writer!
Bravo for the reassuring and your hand-holding style of writing that brings us along on every possible experience you can share!
You are a writer of life. softerware

Re: A Dip Inside Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Thursday, 15th December 2016 @ 11:10:56 PM AEST
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where is that path at
I wanna change too
but
I am trapped on this crazy roundabout.....

Re: A Dip Inside Myself (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Tuesday, 20th December 2016 @ 01:37:24 PM AEST
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Reminds me exactly of a friend I have, who even now, despite all the years resolutely believes his views, thoughts and opinions are the only ones that truly count.
At least you have accepted there are other views.
I should really get him to read this and see if it will change his mind too.

Steve

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