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Loyal sisters and scars
Raised by lullaby smack
Taught joker play cards
Broken face grown beat
Bourbon doll her name
Bare chest hotel retreat
The queen says go king
Shots later naked escape
Cackling below the street
Police cruise puddles tire
Alleyway eyes barrel fate
A cobble lamp humidifier
Better button your game

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Wild Card

Contributed by duff on Tuesday, 1st November 2016 @ 07:29:28 PM in AEST
Topic: Lifepoems

Childhood coffee black
Loyal sisters and scars
Raised by lullaby smack
Taught joker play cards
Broken face grown beat
Bourbon doll her name
Bare chest hotel retreat
The queen says go king
Shots later naked escape
Cackling below the street
Police cruise puddles tire
Alleyway eyes barrel fate
A cobble lamp humidifier
Better button your game

Copyright © duff ... [ 2016-11-01 19:29:28]
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Re: Wild Card (User Rating: 1 )
by ming on Tuesday, 1st November 2016 @ 08:17:47 PM AEST
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So many cool lines here! Examples; lullaby smack, bourbon doll, naked escape, alleyway eyes and button your game. Obviously I dig this.

ming

Re: Wild Card (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Callif on Wednesday, 2nd November 2016 @ 11:24:12 AM AEST
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I absolutely love the flow of this poem

"Alleyway eyes barrel fate"
so much emotion wrapped up in these lines...

Re: Wild Card (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Thursday, 3rd November 2016 @ 12:47:49 PM AEST
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This was very unique.
I really enjoyed this.

James

Re: Wild Card (User Rating: 1 )
by Voice of the Silent on Saturday, 5th November 2016 @ 01:55:57 AM AEST
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DIfferent from anything I"ve read, unique. hope to see more of that unique style
-voice

Re: Wild Card (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Saturday, 5th November 2016 @ 11:39:19 PM AEST
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So kool
the way this flowed
good stuff......

Re: Wild Card (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Sunday, 6th November 2016 @ 11:32:09 AM AEST
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From the title to the final line- love it. Smile-inducing.

Thanks for sharing!

~Scorp

Re: Wild Card (User Rating: 1 )
by shereal_14 on Friday, 11th November 2016 @ 08:06:46 PM AEST
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Amazing!!!

Re: Wild Card (User Rating: 1 )
by ingeniusidiot on Monday, 28th November 2016 @ 11:16:57 AM AEST
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i have to agree this is very unique. Ive always enjoyed reading your work. Im glad i was finally able to come back here.

Rich

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