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Array ( [sid] => 18299 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Disheartened [time] => 2003-05-31 03:35:00 [hometext] => this is about a recent break-up I had with my girlfriend. the song is a slow melow at first and aggressive near the end...
hopefully later on in time we will back together again.
please comment I would like some input on the words. [bodytext] => Disheartened

Lost within my circumstances,
corrupted by fate.
Hurt inside and can’t escape,
the pain you have given me.

Like a piercing needle.
Embedded into my heart.
The angle that cries.
Has left me tonight.
And I cry deep inside
I wont show you these tears.
You have seamed to poison me.
Poisoned my heart again.

(Break)

Changing thoughts and lying.
Pain inside still lives.
Changing thoughts and dying.
Pain inside still lives.
Lying on my back,
I am dead inside.
Pain inside still lives.
The pain inside lives on.

(Break)
(hard fast)

Bring me down, and take me away!
Bring me down, and take me away!
Bring me down, and take me away!
Bring me down, and take me away!

Hateful days into, desolate nights!
Bring me down, one more time!
Hateful ways into, bull *****!
And you stand there, wonder why!

Kill the pain inside, of my heart!
You placed it there, deep inside!
Reach with your life, crawl inside!
Awaken my heart, that once has DIED! [comments] => 3 [counter] => 324 [topic] => 34 [informant] => metalmouth666 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SongLyrics )
Disheartened

Contributed by metalmouth666 on Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 03:35:00 AM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics



Disheartened

Lost within my circumstances,
corrupted by fate.
Hurt inside and can’t escape,
the pain you have given me.

Like a piercing needle.
Embedded into my heart.
The angle that cries.
Has left me tonight.
And I cry deep inside
I wont show you these tears.
You have seamed to poison me.
Poisoned my heart again.

(Break)

Changing thoughts and lying.
Pain inside still lives.
Changing thoughts and dying.
Pain inside still lives.
Lying on my back,
I am dead inside.
Pain inside still lives.
The pain inside lives on.

(Break)
(hard fast)

Bring me down, and take me away!
Bring me down, and take me away!
Bring me down, and take me away!
Bring me down, and take me away!

Hateful days into, desolate nights!
Bring me down, one more time!
Hateful ways into, bull *****!
And you stand there, wonder why!

Kill the pain inside, of my heart!
You placed it there, deep inside!
Reach with your life, crawl inside!
Awaken my heart, that once has DIED!




Copyright © metalmouth666 ... [ 2003-05-31 03:35:00]
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Re: Disheartened (User Rating: 1 )
by LovingWhispers on Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 05:26:16 AM AEST
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I read the intro to this and the "please comment" got me in lol...Glad it did coz I really like this.I'd like to hear the actual music but just reading the lyrics said a lot for your feelings at this time.Excellent depth and I hope all works out for you..


Re: Disheartened (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 11:41:01 AM AEST
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This is great!! I cant wait to it it put to music!! Well done.
Michelle


Re: Disheartened (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 31st May 2003 @ 04:59:25 PM AEST
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Input? On the words? They are fine just the way they are!!! But I do think you meant "angel",Correct??? 0:-)
Beautiful expression!!! Loved it!!!!
Angel always...Godspeed! joni




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