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Array ( [sid] => 182806 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Of all the Hearts I/'/ve Left Behind [time] => 2016-03-19 13:42:10 [hometext] => I had a number of these lines come to me in the shower, and as soon as I was done I had to rush to my phone and start writing. XD [bodytext] =>

I made a joke at your expense
Unaware of the consequence
All I/'/ve misconstrued,
Exposed my inner nude
I/'/ve made mistakes throughout my life
Had the audacity to call them strife
Now I/'/ve come to learn
Just why your resistance was so stern
Of all the hearts I/'/ve left behind
Yours is the one I still want to have as mine
I can see it now, drifting in time/'/s sands
All thanks to, these shameful idle hands
In hopes to find it I scanned
In hopes we/'/d make a mountainous stand
May I retrieve it, before I perish in the brine?
Or is the thought, but simply asinine? [comments] => 1 [counter] => 128 [topic] => 2 [informant] => xHeathenx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Of all the Hearts I've Left Behind

Contributed by xHeathenx on Saturday, 19th March 2016 @ 01:42:10 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I made a joke at your expense
Unaware of the consequence
All I/'/ve misconstrued,
Exposed my inner nude
I/'/ve made mistakes throughout my life
Had the audacity to call them strife
Now I/'/ve come to learn
Just why your resistance was so stern
Of all the hearts I/'/ve left behind
Yours is the one I still want to have as mine
I can see it now, drifting in time/'/s sands
All thanks to, these shameful idle hands
In hopes to find it I scanned
In hopes we/'/d make a mountainous stand
May I retrieve it, before I perish in the brine?
Or is the thought, but simply asinine?

Copyright © xHeathenx ... [ 2016-03-19 13:42:10]
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Re: Of all the Hearts I've Left Behind (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Saturday, 19th March 2016 @ 03:43:54 PM AEST
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A very clever twist at the end brings this mini-story to an acrid finish! A touch of spice to a mild menu of self-reproach, and longing reflection!
Just the right contrast to flash in the pan at the finale; like a sweet crepe Suzette, bursting into flame! Eloquent flourish; much enjoyed and unexpected!
Delightful!
softerware

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