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Array ( [sid] => 182107 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I see you [time] => 2015-11-13 16:46:15 [hometext] => for a friend struggling with a loss, hope this brings you some peace [bodytext] => I can see you struggle
down below
to deal with my passing,
the tears that flow.
To stay with you there
many nights I did pray
but God called me home
and I had to obey.
It saddens me greatly to
to cause such grief,
I hope that my words
bring you some peace.
It's wonderful here
and I'm not alone,
surrounded by loved ones
support they have shown.
So please believe me
when I say
I'm happy here
I'm really okay.
[comments] => 3 [counter] => 150 [topic] => 39 [informant] => kmec1990 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

I see you

Contributed by kmec1990 on Friday, 13th November 2015 @ 04:46:15 PM in AEST
Topic: Grief

I can see you struggle
down below
to deal with my passing,
the tears that flow.
To stay with you there
many nights I did pray
but God called me home
and I had to obey.
It saddens me greatly to
to cause such grief,
I hope that my words
bring you some peace.
It's wonderful here
and I'm not alone,
surrounded by loved ones
support they have shown.
So please believe me
when I say
I'm happy here
I'm really okay.

Copyright © kmec1990 ... [ 2015-11-13 16:46:15]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: I see you (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Friday, 13th November 2015 @ 05:50:39 PM AEST
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I actually teared up reading this. I lost a friend 10 years ago, so I could relate to this.

It's my favourite one so far.
Beautiful write.

Hannah B

Re: I see you (User Rating: 1 )
by thomasu01 on Monday, 16th November 2015 @ 08:22:24 AM AEST
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Had to show this to my wife as she just lost a brother overseas, 2 days before she was due to travel to see him. Hard pill to swallow.
This is beautiful and soothing in a time of grief.

Thank you.

Re: I see you (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 17th November 2015 @ 04:31:28 PM AEST
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So touching and beautiful (and sad), but they truly do let us know they're okay. Thank you, Tim

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