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Array ( [sid] => 181847 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => two am trap [time] => 2015-09-24 02:30:30 [hometext] => When truth has no burning, then it is philosophy, when it gets burning from the heart, it becomes poetry.~Muhammad Iqbal [bodytext] => hold...breathe
flip back
my head
like a
Pez dispenser
brain chattering
like a playing
card in a wheel
corkscrewing
deeper down.
is the rabbit
already in the hat
do I believe
nothing
is
everything
or
everything
is
all? [comments] => 5 [counter] => 251 [topic] => 73 [informant] => ming [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => abstract )

two am trap

Contributed by ming on Thursday, 24th September 2015 @ 02:30:30 AM in AEST
Topic: abstract

hold...breathe
flip back
my head
like a
Pez dispenser
brain chattering
like a playing
card in a wheel
corkscrewing
deeper down.
is the rabbit
already in the hat
do I believe
nothing
is
everything
or
everything
is
all?

Copyright © ming ... [ 2015-09-24 02:30:30]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: two am trap (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Thursday, 24th September 2015 @ 01:37:20 PM AEST
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I love this poem strong message beautifully drawn thank you for sharing this--kara

Re: two am trap (User Rating: 1 )
by karoody on Thursday, 24th September 2015 @ 01:37:34 PM AEST
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I love this poem strong message beautifully drawn thank you for sharing this--kara

Re: two am trap (User Rating: 1 )
by Invierno on Friday, 25th September 2015 @ 09:15:04 AM AEST
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so very cool. I see you enjoy the Sufi Dervishes. I myself has danced around the fire (as imagine you have as well).

To Shams Tabriz!

Invierno

Re: two am trap (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Friday, 25th September 2015 @ 07:30:07 PM AEST
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entangled introspection and a beautiful quote that validates the process - who could ask for more?

S.

Re: two am trap (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 27th September 2015 @ 03:12:33 AM AEST
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oh yes, philosophy is to be such a blank
to me
just as to me anything cold could ever be
but cold can be good
and so could warmth
even hot
I swear it so
I have no choice

Love your stuff Ming, always wondered about
the tricks in the magic show
And we the rabbit
The territorial foolish ones
That often miss the most of what is truly mystical
such as ourselves and all the rest

Peace!

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