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Array ( [sid] => 181518 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I Want to Go Away [time] => 2015-08-03 13:47:17 [hometext] => Divorce is something I wish no one has to go through. It really messes with your mind. But here I am writing poetry about it, one step at a time! [bodytext] => I don’t want to be here
I just want to go
Send me high into the sky
Where absolutely nobody knows

I could sit upon a cloud
And cry rain on your parade
Just like you did that day
As you threw our love away

I’ll never truly understand
What happened on that day
I knew our life was tough sometimes
But I never saw it ending this way

You left me feeling worthless
All awhile you’re okay
You left me here to die alone
With a cold hearted smile on your face

This isn’t the woman I used to know
So mean and so unjust
Destroying our Marriage…
For you, it must have been a must

Forgiving myself should be easy
At least that’s what they all say
Although they don’t live my life
Every night and every day

Time is my enemy
And I am my only friend
I hope you’re truly happy
With how you choose for this to end

So send me high into the sky
So I can be alone
Away from all the craziness
From a place I used to call home
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I Want to Go Away

Contributed by blknwht on Monday, 3rd August 2015 @ 01:47:17 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

I don’t want to be here
I just want to go
Send me high into the sky
Where absolutely nobody knows

I could sit upon a cloud
And cry rain on your parade
Just like you did that day
As you threw our love away

I’ll never truly understand
What happened on that day
I knew our life was tough sometimes
But I never saw it ending this way

You left me feeling worthless
All awhile you’re okay
You left me here to die alone
With a cold hearted smile on your face

This isn’t the woman I used to know
So mean and so unjust
Destroying our Marriage…
For you, it must have been a must

Forgiving myself should be easy
At least that’s what they all say
Although they don’t live my life
Every night and every day

Time is my enemy
And I am my only friend
I hope you’re truly happy
With how you choose for this to end

So send me high into the sky
So I can be alone
Away from all the craziness
From a place I used to call home

Copyright Â© blknwht ... [ 2015-08-03 13:47:17]
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Re: I Want to Go Away (User Rating: 1 )
by speedy on Monday, 3rd August 2015 @ 05:36:25 PM AEST
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Great write.

Hannah B

Re: I Want to Go Away (User Rating: 1 )
by mrpeanut64 on Monday, 3rd August 2015 @ 09:11:43 PM AEST
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One day at a time. It does eventually get easier.

Re: I Want to Go Away (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 4th August 2015 @ 01:33:46 AM AEST
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Great write
It's called a divorce for a reason.
You now can divorce yourself from all of
the BS. and be free.

Good Luck and Peace!
James

Re: I Want to Go Away (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 6th August 2015 @ 11:21:27 AM AEST
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The pain is palatable. I imagine this hurt quite a bit to write, but even more so to experience. Keep writing. Getting the emotion out is better than it rotting out your insides.

Good luck.

~Scorp

Re: I Want to Go Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Monday, 31st August 2015 @ 11:16:25 PM AEST
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If you're not, clean your room and your house then do something special for your self. Don't be afraid to talk about it or to ask for help if you need it.

This was a very good write raw and emotive

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