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Array ( [sid] => 18099 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Daddy,Daddy [time] => 2003-05-27 17:35:00 [hometext] => With Fathers Day coming up,I had to post this one that I wrote for my son,on things he said to his dad! [bodytext] => Daddy Daddy please dont go,
There are things I need to know,
Why must you leave us here,
alone we are sitting in fear,
I cry at night when you leave,
You'll be home soon I believe,
I know you need to make money,
But the days are so nice & sunny,
Why could'nt you just stay,
If only for one more day,
Its Fathers day dad,
Thats why I'm sad,
How long will you be gone this time,
You always think we'll be just fine,
But really Daddy you miss out,
on all the things lifes about,
when you get back I'll have grown an inch taller,
can you even remember the days I was smaller,
So much you do miss,
after that good bye kiss,
Daddy ,Daddy did you hear me say,
I love you, Happy Fathers Day!?????
[comments] => 8 [counter] => 360 [topic] => 15 [informant] => LOWMAN613 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 15 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => FathersDayPoems )
Daddy,Daddy

Contributed by LOWMAN613 on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 05:35:00 PM in AEST
Topic: FathersDayPoems



Daddy Daddy please dont go,
There are things I need to know,
Why must you leave us here,
alone we are sitting in fear,
I cry at night when you leave,
You'll be home soon I believe,
I know you need to make money,
But the days are so nice & sunny,
Why could'nt you just stay,
If only for one more day,
Its Fathers day dad,
Thats why I'm sad,
How long will you be gone this time,
You always think we'll be just fine,
But really Daddy you miss out,
on all the things lifes about,
when you get back I'll have grown an inch taller,
can you even remember the days I was smaller,
So much you do miss,
after that good bye kiss,
Daddy ,Daddy did you hear me say,
I love you, Happy Fathers Day!?????




Copyright © LOWMAN613 ... [ 2003-05-27 17:35:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Daddy,Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by The_Phantom on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 06:19:51 PM AEST
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Very heartfelt, being a father mtself I can relate to this, being a soldier doesn't help either. Great write it touched me.

The Phantom


Re: Daddy,Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 06:28:27 PM AEST
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very good write
Shari


Re: Daddy,Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 02:09:37 AM AEST
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very lovely.. a beautiful write.. venkat


Re: Daddy,Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 09:45:38 AM AEST
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Oh Christina, this is an emotional write. We have no children but I know the truckers life well and my friends went through this all of the time with coming and going and the feelings of the kids. Tis true the trucker does miss out on alot of the everyday things and it is very hard!! I loved this poem!!
Michelle


Re: Daddy,Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by LadyDama on Wednesday, 28th May 2003 @ 11:21:39 AM AEST
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this is a beautiful poem, and so sad at the same time... i know you miss your hubby and your children do too... maybe someday the trucking life won't be necessary... blessings... michele


Re: Daddy,Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 12:39:52 PM AEST
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My father was away 8 weeks each trip five times a year. I know this feeling you describe so well


Re: Daddy,Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Chuckx on Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 12:45:39 PM AEST
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Your poem struck a dark note deep inside. I didn't grow up with my father and can feel the loneliness of missing him. Thank you for letting me feel that again.

Chuck.


Re: Daddy,Daddy (User Rating: 1 )
by Lone_er on Thursday, 29th May 2003 @ 11:53:32 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem maam. One that touched me and all fathers who have grown children. We realize too late that the things that count most in life are friends and family- Always a job- Children grow up in a flash. All my best. Russ




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