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Bring me the pain
Bring me your love
Bring your sweet disdain

The fires that burn
Inside this lead statue
Bear their brightness
From the effervescient you

I stand solid in hopes
That your slender glass frame
Can rest upon my shoulders
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Lead and Glass

Contributed by xHeathenx on Wednesday, 25th March 2015 @ 05:13:29 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Bring me the passion
Bring me the pain
Bring me your love
Bring your sweet disdain

The fires that burn
Inside this lead statue
Bear their brightness
From the effervescient you

I stand solid in hopes
That your slender glass frame
Can rest upon my shoulders
Should you ever call upon my name

Copyright © xHeathenx ... [ 2015-03-25 05:13:29]
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Re: Lead and Glass (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th March 2015 @ 05:47:59 AM AEST
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Yes, I'd say it is somewhat romantic. It's definitely a testament of one person being dedicated to another. The glass being fragile and the lead being strong, the strength supporting the fragility. Nicely done. Tim

Re: Lead and Glass (User Rating: 1 )
by Waynster on Wednesday, 25th March 2015 @ 12:49:14 PM AEST
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Very well written. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing, my poetic brother!

Wayne

Re: Lead and Glass (User Rating: 1 )
by RussellReinhardt on Thursday, 26th March 2015 @ 04:09:22 AM AEST
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We if you into whips and chains? On an emotional level that is yes romantic. However not for me. I like peace.
None the less a good write.

Greetings
Rus

Re: Lead and Glass (User Rating: 1 )
by softerware on Thursday, 26th March 2015 @ 05:43:24 PM AEST
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Romantic and idealized. Glass and lead. Opposites attracting. Extending an offer with high hopes.
I like the idea that absolutes can reach a middle ground to meld, but although the concept is romantic, one will have to change their state to forge a union!
Which one shall it be? The unanswered question you leave us to ponder!
A story with a riddle ending! What fun!
Thank you,
softerware

Re: Lead and Glass (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Friday, 27th March 2015 @ 03:42:48 PM AEST
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i keep seeing two beautiful statues in a museum, one
reaching out a hand in longing- the other shyly looking
away, a beautifully exquisite image filled write !

hugs n' love nessa

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