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Immeasurable,
Unforgettable,
Supernatural.
My championed litmus test-
I did you wrong.
Severed our bond
And now you're
Gone ...
Not really,
You still remain
Here.
Our home away from home
Where emotions overflow
I know, that you know, what I know,
Is true.
I'm talking to you-
Yes, you.
Closer than many,
I owe you plenty,
I see what you did.
And continue to do,
Pages of spilt ink I owe to you
Eternal thanks, for remaining true
When fair weathered alliances fell through
I love you.
It's nothing new,
I mean it in the purest form.
I owe you so much
For the many ways
You've touched
My life
Never forget,
I'll never regret,
You were never my pawn.
I'm here to right a wrong.
My heart spreads to become your canopy,
Bleeding profusely I gave all of me.
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Return To Sender

Contributed by hauntedscorp on Wednesday, 25th February 2015 @ 10:19:17 AM in AEST
Topic: poets

Over the years you have become
Immeasurable,
Unforgettable,
Supernatural.
My championed litmus test-
I did you wrong.
Severed our bond
And now you're
Gone ...
Not really,
You still remain
Here.
Our home away from home
Where emotions overflow
I know, that you know, what I know,
Is true.
I'm talking to you-
Yes, you.
Closer than many,
I owe you plenty,
I see what you did.
And continue to do,
Pages of spilt ink I owe to you
Eternal thanks, for remaining true
When fair weathered alliances fell through
I love you.
It's nothing new,
I mean it in the purest form.
I owe you so much
For the many ways
You've touched
My life
Never forget,
I'll never regret,
You were never my pawn.
I'm here to right a wrong.
My heart spreads to become your canopy,
Bleeding profusely I gave all of me.

Copyright © hauntedscorp ... [ 2015-02-25 10:19:17]
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Re: Return To Sender (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Wednesday, 25th February 2015 @ 10:25:03 AM AEST
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Deep and profound.
Great read.

Re: Return To Sender (User Rating: 1 )
by Waynster on Wednesday, 25th February 2015 @ 02:42:02 PM AEST
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Very nice write, thank you for sharing. Keep up with your good writing.

Wayne

Re: Return To Sender (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 25th February 2015 @ 07:27:50 PM AEST
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And I see what you did there!!! Another great poem from PerfectoScorp and you definitely put your all out there.

Re: Return To Sender (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Wednesday, 25th February 2015 @ 08:46:51 PM AEST
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Wow, you really know how to express yourself, romantically.

Re: Return To Sender (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 5th March 2015 @ 04:09:17 AM AEST
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Love-hate relationships are often the ones that last the longest. You are good Scorpers. You are very good.

Re: Return To Sender (User Rating: 1 )
by Puppy_dog_eyes on Friday, 6th March 2015 @ 02:56:19 PM AEST
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Another stunning write, though I've come to expect nothing less these days.
The way you weave words with emotion and depth is breathtaking
A pleasure to read

Steve

Re: Return To Sender (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 10th March 2015 @ 06:38:22 PM AEST
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ditto:) ...beautifully penned,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: Return To Sender (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 9th July 2015 @ 06:37:09 PM AEST
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You are definitely a poetess, well versed and descriptive of the world around you and the right words to jump start a heart. May your words ever inspire us to action.

Re: Return To Sender (User Rating: 1 )
by alicewhite on Friday, 17th July 2015 @ 04:26:26 PM AEST
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I know you know I know you knew I know what you know you knew I know and knew too . Now I know without knowing I knew what you know and knew you know I know you know this is true 'now I know your all knowing your words are the proof. Loved it x

Re: Return To Sender (User Rating: 1 )
by darkcapricorn on Wednesday, 5th August 2015 @ 12:53:01 AM AEST
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Ya know, I'm just going to have to post some writing of my own on here after reading this.....and how I ended up here after a dream that literally just happened, I will never know....stay tuned......and good write.

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