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Some are born with what it takes
Others find their breeze
In the clouds
Dreaming of perfection
While ignoring reality

A semblance of love
Comes knocking at your door
You don't recognize it
Yet you open wide
Draw jaw dropped
Cherry fisted popped
A sucker
You usher it inside
A welcome mat
Hides your dirt
Feeds your pride
Confidence in yourself
Misleads itself
Under the guise
Of individuality
A persona quickly dies
You were you
That I can't deny

Here I stay seated
Feet clamped to your rug
Waiting for you to make an entrance
I hear you knocking with your love

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High Voltage

Contributed by Jyssvw22 on Wednesday, 26th November 2014 @ 04:56:51 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

Some are brave
Some are born with what it takes
Others find their breeze
In the clouds
Dreaming of perfection
While ignoring reality

A semblance of love
Comes knocking at your door
You don't recognize it
Yet you open wide
Draw jaw dropped
Cherry fisted popped
A sucker
You usher it inside
A welcome mat
Hides your dirt
Feeds your pride
Confidence in yourself
Misleads itself
Under the guise
Of individuality
A persona quickly dies
You were you
That I can't deny

Here I stay seated
Feet clamped to your rug
Waiting for you to make an entrance
I hear you knocking with your love

----------
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Copyright © Jyssvw22 ... [ 2014-11-26 16:56:51]
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Re: High Voltage (User Rating: 1 )
by hauntedscorp on Thursday, 27th November 2014 @ 07:57:44 AM AEST
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So much content to explore...and ponder. How do we know if we are part of the brave, or the ignorant? At times both can seem daunting. I also like the concept of 'ushering in a semblance of love'. That's never a fun reality, but you leave the reader with the hope of something real waiting, patiently.

Don't get me started on the title...Wonderfully electric.

~Scorp

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