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Array ( [sid] => 17936 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => My Life's End [time] => 2003-05-22 03:05:00 [hometext] => ....please, just don't ask.... [bodytext] => I finally heard it; it broke my heart
He never loved, not from the start.
I scream and I cry, for I want to die,
Life's always been this way, but why?

Never can I sleep again, I'll stay awake
Only until life gives me a damn break
No one loves me, nobody ever will
My heart's so empty, and with nothing to refill

There's no reason to live anymore
My last reason flew out the door
Somebody kill me, give me my death
I'll die however, I'll even choke on my last breath

Should I use a knife, or a razor blade instead?
No, I'll only suffer longer. A gun to my head
So, someone, take away my life now
I don't care who, I don't care how

I sit in my room alone and try to choose
After all these years, I have so many of life's bruises
Just somebody, please take me away
I don't want to stay here, not another day

I ran out of tears, so I now cry bloody tears
I have lived so many useless years
Nobody wants me, they won't notice my disappearence
Since I have few friends, there will be no interference.

Alone at night, blade in hand
I place it upon my wrist as my hair falls in strands
This will be my beginning of the end
Nothing can stop me, my heart won't tend

So now I finally bid my farewell
To everyone around me who never could tell
This is it. My death at last
To you, my death had come way too fast.....

But no, not to me,
Blessed may I be
I slowly ended, with pain, my fight
I enter the darkness, and leave the light [comments] => 5 [counter] => 239 [topic] => 36 [informant] => ruby_star_angel [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )
My Life's End

Contributed by ruby_star_angel on Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 03:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: Suicide



I finally heard it; it broke my heart
He never loved, not from the start.
I scream and I cry, for I want to die,
Life's always been this way, but why?

Never can I sleep again, I'll stay awake
Only until life gives me a damn break
No one loves me, nobody ever will
My heart's so empty, and with nothing to refill

There's no reason to live anymore
My last reason flew out the door
Somebody kill me, give me my death
I'll die however, I'll even choke on my last breath

Should I use a knife, or a razor blade instead?
No, I'll only suffer longer. A gun to my head
So, someone, take away my life now
I don't care who, I don't care how

I sit in my room alone and try to choose
After all these years, I have so many of life's bruises
Just somebody, please take me away
I don't want to stay here, not another day

I ran out of tears, so I now cry bloody tears
I have lived so many useless years
Nobody wants me, they won't notice my disappearence
Since I have few friends, there will be no interference.

Alone at night, blade in hand
I place it upon my wrist as my hair falls in strands
This will be my beginning of the end
Nothing can stop me, my heart won't tend

So now I finally bid my farewell
To everyone around me who never could tell
This is it. My death at last
To you, my death had come way too fast.....

But no, not to me,
Blessed may I be
I slowly ended, with pain, my fight
I enter the darkness, and leave the light




Copyright © ruby_star_angel ... [ 2003-05-22 03:05:00]
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Re: My Life's End (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 04:57:00 AM AEST
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ooooo This is so powerful. I truly hope that you don't feel like this in reality. If you ever want to talk, PM me.

sleepless_siren


Re: My Life's End (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 03:34:04 PM AEST
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Aww Manderz, this is truly beautiful, but please, please PM me when you get back online again.. I'll be there to listen..
afraid_of_fear
x_x_x


Re: My Life's End (User Rating: 0 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th May 2003 @ 11:33:11 PM AEST
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hey i really like your stuff i was wondering of writing stuff like that for my band and we will send u the c.d when its finished. please reply


Re: My Life's End (User Rating: 1 )
by Wrybod on Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 06:17:09 PM AEST
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It's perfectly natural for species to "die out" when circmstances will no longer support their lifestyle.

Your poem is very personalised and very well written. An illustration of the loneliness of overcrowding.


Re: My Life's End (User Rating: 1 )
by ruby_star_angel on Wednesday, 4th June 2003 @ 07:03:25 PM AEST
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You would really not me to write stuff for your band? Well, what kind of stuff do you mean? If you have an e-mail, please tell me it.




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