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Array ( [sid] => 17932 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Better Off With Me [time] => 2003-05-22 01:05:00 [hometext] => I hope this doesn't make me seem conceited b/c im really not and everything in this poem is true and what was said by him is all true and i honestly do believe i'm a much better person than her. [bodytext] => You better hurry up,
and make up your mind soon.
Better make a decision quick,
because I’m done wasting time on you.
It’s your time to choose.
It’s either me or her.
If you would just leave her,
i’ll give you what you want.
I know what you want from me,
because you have already told me.
But your not going to get anything,
until your with me.
You know you love me more,
because you have said this before.
You even called her a whore.
You said you couldn’t trust her,
but your still with her.
Are you that dumb,
that you can’t see?
That you would be better off,
if you were with me. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 188 [topic] => 2 [informant] => crossmyheartwithaknife [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Better Off With Me

Contributed by crossmyheartwithaknife on Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 01:05:00 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

You better hurry up,
and make up your mind soon.
Better make a decision quick,
because I’m done wasting time on you.
It’s your time to choose.
It’s either me or her.
If you would just leave her,
i’ll give you what you want.
I know what you want from me,
because you have already told me.
But your not going to get anything,
until your with me.
You know you love me more,
because you have said this before.
You even called her a whore.
You said you couldn’t trust her,
but your still with her.
Are you that dumb,
that you can’t see?
That you would be better off,
if you were with me.

Copyright Â© crossmyheartwithaknife ... [ 2003-05-22 01:05:00]
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Re: Better Off With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by MoonlitAngel on Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 06:38:34 AM AEST
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I have to say, this hits home... before my bf and I became an offical couple, he was *spending time* with his ex as well as with me and she's such a heinous b*tch and he was always complaining about her and saying bad things about her, all of which were true, but yet he kept running back to her no matter how badly she treated him, which, trust me, was pretty bad. Even now he's pretty good friends with her, and I'll never for the life of me understand why. Great poem! Blessed be,

~ Moonlit

Re: Better Off With Me (User Rating: 1 )
by princesspurty on Sunday, 22nd June 2003 @ 04:25:13 PM AEST
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great poem, sadly this is how it is sometimes

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