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Array ( [sid] => 179267 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Together We Should Be [time] => 2014-09-13 01:15:21 [hometext] => Trying to work it out [bodytext] => I cannot pretend,
that things are all OK.
When you know for a fact,
that it's all in disarray.
We badly need to talk,
and you just walk away.
How is that suppose to,
really make me want to stay?
Together forever,
is what we've always said.
Your anger and rage,
has you gravely misled.
I receive no respect,
nor words of encouragement.
Instead I get very horrid remarks,
and a mass of resentment.
How much do you expect me,
to withstand before I break?
A shattered woman in a shell,
is all you will make.
Do you not care enough,
to help me get this fixed?
It will be our family,
that will be greatly and deeply missed.
We need to be together,
can you not see?
You have to face this,
instead of trying to flee. [comments] => 3 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 65 [informant] => fairiepsycho [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => toughstuff )

Together We Should Be

Contributed by fairiepsycho on Saturday, 13th September 2014 @ 01:15:21 AM in AEST
Topic: toughstuff

I cannot pretend,
that things are all OK.
When you know for a fact,
that it's all in disarray.
We badly need to talk,
and you just walk away.
How is that suppose to,
really make me want to stay?
Together forever,
is what we've always said.
Your anger and rage,
has you gravely misled.
I receive no respect,
nor words of encouragement.
Instead I get very horrid remarks,
and a mass of resentment.
How much do you expect me,
to withstand before I break?
A shattered woman in a shell,
is all you will make.
Do you not care enough,
to help me get this fixed?
It will be our family,
that will be greatly and deeply missed.
We need to be together,
can you not see?
You have to face this,
instead of trying to flee.

Copyright © fairiepsycho ... [ 2014-09-13 01:15:21]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Together We Should Be (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Saturday, 13th September 2014 @ 07:18:40 PM AEST
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I really loved this. it flowed so nicely and it feels like a topic i can very much relate to. thank you for sharing this.

Re: Together We Should Be (User Rating: 1 )
by emystar on Saturday, 13th September 2014 @ 08:48:43 PM AEST
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Great writing even tho it's sad.
I can relate in many ways.
I hope he reads this and wakes up before it's too late.
Huggs, blessings,
emy

Re: Together We Should Be (User Rating: 1 )
by mvvenkataraman on Wednesday, 17th September 2014 @ 10:39:07 AM AEST
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A lovely poem is this one
Fine reasoning is done
This is told by a woman
She can subdue a demon
My admiration is won
Being together is fun
Wisely told my dear son
Unity under the Sun.

mvvenkataraman

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