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once upon a time there was a little girl,

she spent unaccountable hours alone

looking up into the skies, one day

she saw the most beautiful blue ever,

this was a very nice happy blue

it made her feel all warm inside.



then her gaze went to the grass which

today was the most fascinating green,

and it was a day she thought to herself

would never be forgotton, it was so pretty.



she would see the blue and the green,

she loved these colours very muchly,

but; the blue wasn't always blue,

and the green wasn't always green,

sometimes the blues of the skies changed,

sometimes they were bright and brilliant,

sometimes dark and threatening, almost black,

often the greens had different hues, too,

sometimes the green was deep and very green

and new green was so fresh it made her smile,

so she knew that blue wasn't forever blue

and green wasn't infinitly green, they varied.



then, one day the little girl was sent to school,

and there she learned all about her lovely colours,

these colours she loved more than anything in her life,

she was told blue was always blue,

and green was always green,

but that wasn't true she thought.



after many years of blue being blue

and green being green, it didn't matter

anymore.



no longer was her life quite as happy.



she laughed less often, her heart smiled not as much,

something was missing but what it was she did not know,

she couldn't remember what used to make her so giddy and

pleased with her life, but she knew one thing was true, blue

was always blue and green was always green.



many many many many many years later,

the little girl now had grown all up and had her

children's children's children all around her, one of them

pointed at the sky and asked her what colour is that?

inside her heart melted because she loved this child so.



another child right that very minute, asked her why her

eyes were leaking and she started to laugh, she laughed a big laugh,

then she told the children all about all she knew about the bluest blue

and greenest green she'd ever seen on a long begone special day that

she had remembered she had forgotton to remember.



right in her heart she was happy warm again,

with bluest blue and greenest green,

and all the colours in between.


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bluest blue greenest green

Contributed by ladyfawn on Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 11:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic: didactic










once upon a time there was a little girl,

she spent unaccountable hours alone

looking up into the skies, one day

she saw the most beautiful blue ever,

this was a very nice happy blue

it made her feel all warm inside.



then her gaze went to the grass which

today was the most fascinating green,

and it was a day she thought to herself

would never be forgotton, it was so pretty.



she would see the blue and the green,

she loved these colours very muchly,

but; the blue wasn't always blue,

and the green wasn't always green,

sometimes the blues of the skies changed,

sometimes they were bright and brilliant,

sometimes dark and threatening, almost black,

often the greens had different hues, too,

sometimes the green was deep and very green

and new green was so fresh it made her smile,

so she knew that blue wasn't forever blue

and green wasn't infinitly green, they varied.



then, one day the little girl was sent to school,

and there she learned all about her lovely colours,

these colours she loved more than anything in her life,

she was told blue was always blue,

and green was always green,

but that wasn't true she thought.



after many years of blue being blue

and green being green, it didn't matter

anymore.



no longer was her life quite as happy.



she laughed less often, her heart smiled not as much,

something was missing but what it was she did not know,

she couldn't remember what used to make her so giddy and

pleased with her life, but she knew one thing was true, blue

was always blue and green was always green.



many many many many many years later,

the little girl now had grown all up and had her

children's children's children all around her, one of them

pointed at the sky and asked her what colour is that?

inside her heart melted because she loved this child so.



another child right that very minute, asked her why her

eyes were leaking and she started to laugh, she laughed a big laugh,

then she told the children all about all she knew about the bluest blue

and greenest green she'd ever seen on a long begone special day that

she had remembered she had forgotton to remember.



right in her heart she was happy warm again,

with bluest blue and greenest green,

and all the colours in between.






Copyright © ladyfawn ... [ 2003-05-20 23:05:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: bluest blue greenest green (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Tuesday, 20th May 2003 @ 11:18:30 PM AEST
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heart warming and beautiful my friend a lovely write
Shari


Re: bluest blue greenest green (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 12:30:00 AM AEST
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Awwww (((Nessa))) I loved this grrlfriend.. and right now, I'm green with envy....
Jenni


Re: bluest blue greenest green (User Rating: 1 )
by AngryPrincess on Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 01:29:42 AM AEST
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very good write nessa, good job keep it up

Lindsey


Re: bluest blue greenest green (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 01:36:21 AM AEST
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thanks lindsey:) ~hugs nessa


Re: bluest blue greenest green (User Rating: 1 )
by Bongo on Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 01:37:41 AM AEST
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Can relate to another
Blue eyes, green eyes, some in between
Missed to discover
When a smile can be seen.

Love your work again
Am once again,
Feeling sane.


Re: bluest blue greenest green (User Rating: 1 )
by venkat on Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 02:58:27 AM AEST
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Big poem...but beautiful... venkat


Re: bluest blue greenest green (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 08:10:37 AM AEST
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Nessa, this is beautiful my dear. Yet another WONDERFUL poem from you.

sleepless_siren


Re: bluest blue greenest green (User Rating: 1 )
by shelby on Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 10:17:00 AM AEST
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Nessa a lovely poem. Let us not forget!!
Michelle


Re: bluest blue greenest green (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Wednesday, 21st May 2003 @ 11:28:55 AM AEST
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Beautiful snapshot of childhood innocence and coming-of-age... very well done Nessa.
Loved it!

Daniela


Re: bluest blue greenest green (User Rating: 1 )
by Kindredblood_dragon on Thursday, 22nd May 2003 @ 09:17:23 PM AEST
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Interesting poem/story I liked it.
I can see now why your work is so revered, keep it up.


Re: bluest blue greenest green (User Rating: 1 )
by Ronald on Thursday, 12th June 2003 @ 06:23:06 AM AEST
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This is such a touching poem.


Re: bluest blue greenest green (User Rating: 1 )
by princesspurty on Wednesday, 2nd July 2003 @ 08:07:36 PM AEST
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remarkable!


Re: bluest blue greenest green (User Rating: 1 )
by Drzewo on Wednesday, 15th October 2003 @ 12:17:12 PM AEST
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The most colorful poem I've ever read... great job with the little girl.

Drzewo


Re: bluest blue greenest green (User Rating: 1 )
by ammalu on Thursday, 29th April 2004 @ 03:27:50 AM AEST
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interesting story yet appears lengthy-nice piece.


Re: bluest blue greenest green (User Rating: 1 )
by buchi on Monday, 5th July 2004 @ 06:39:34 AM AEST
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Thoroughly enjoyed it...your poem glowed with its own light..


Re: bluest blue greenest green (User Rating: 1 )
by Psyche on Wednesday, 7th July 2004 @ 10:44:37 PM AEST
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This is lovely.. One I would post in the room of a school-age child, or perhaps on the door facing out. It would help ME to remember the world as seen through the eyes of children. Very motivating. Thank you!


Re: bluest blue greenest green (User Rating: 1 )
by Rhymingron on Saturday, 8th January 2005 @ 03:49:58 PM AEST
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This took me back many years to when I was a barefoot country boy. One of my most cherished memories is sitting in a grassy spot high on a hill where I went often to do nothing. I will never forget the blue sky and the various shades of green as I looked out over the valley below and beyond. I cannot remember a more peaceful feeling. Thank you for this wonderful peice.




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