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dream of peace and wonderful things
don't hesitate, to go and see
one day many things will become ones dreams

Dreams that make you feel unsure
and dreams that take you to many pleasures
they can be dark and deep
but keep them in thy beating heart

Now close thy eyes and dream

BOO WAKE UP, its reality all again
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A whimsical of Dreams

Contributed by brew on Friday, 6th June 2014 @ 11:48:23 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Close thy eyes and dream
dream of peace and wonderful things
don't hesitate, to go and see
one day many things will become ones dreams

Dreams that make you feel unsure
and dreams that take you to many pleasures
they can be dark and deep
but keep them in thy beating heart

Now close thy eyes and dream

BOO WAKE UP, its reality all again

Copyright © brew ... [ 2014-06-06 23:48:23]
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Re: A whimsical of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 7th June 2014 @ 07:46:13 AM AEST
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I really liked this! And after reading to the end, I realise how well the title fits the poem! It's great writing and it really drew me in :)

Re: A whimsical of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Saturday, 7th June 2014 @ 11:04:31 AM AEST
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soft, lovely, dreamish for sure, indeed so beautifully penned...
then the last line smacked me right in the forehead lol,

hugs n' love nessa

Re: A whimsical of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by unknown_utopia on Sunday, 8th June 2014 @ 08:24:40 PM AEST
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Like LadyFawn said
sweet gentle
then
BOOM...LOL.

Re: A whimsical of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 9th June 2014 @ 02:46:14 PM AEST
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Lovely title.. The last line made me smile.
Enjoyed it.
Good seeing you again. Check your PM...
JenniK

Re: A whimsical of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by Ferrari14 on Monday, 9th June 2014 @ 05:38:45 PM AEST
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Wonderful poem

Re: A whimsical of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by JockPhillips on Wednesday, 18th June 2014 @ 02:41:59 PM AEST
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It is one for the dreamers who dream and light the night with their wicks and their whimsies.

Re: A whimsical of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by AquaBlossom on Monday, 4th August 2014 @ 01:11:05 PM AEST
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Good write- Darcy

Re: A whimsical of Dreams (User Rating: 1 )
by JamesStockdale on Tuesday, 2nd April 2019 @ 12:16:39 AM AEST
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I used to like to dream and turn those dreams into reality.
Many years ago that left me. I think I/'/ll try to rediscover the art of dreaming. Great writing.

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